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Becoming a doctor is tough, especially if you've been taken as a pupil of Princess Celestia early on in your career. Having all your education and living arraignments being paid for can be a real nuisance, right? Finally, someone who understands me! I think we could be good friends. This is a story about a young graduate colt trying to get a sound education living with two ruling royal ruinal mares.

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Welcome to my first fanfic ever. I do hope it is to your liking, as OC ponies are usually frowned upon (like other unmentionable things) :twilightsmile:

Do not fear! It is not a self-insert, but this story will serve as an outlet for my medical knowledge and primary source of stress relief.

Feel free to review and comment as harsh as you want , It serves to make me a better writer. :pinkiehappy:
I wish to be held accountable for the standards my readers expect of me, and being the narcissitic person I am, I want to go above and beyond those expectations and provide you with a memorable reading experinces. (some nasty long words in that last sentence :derpytongue2: )

This is an awsome story, cant wait for more :pinkiehappy: loved trollestia to, dont get enough of her :pinkiehappy:

The same you would find at an Amish pony store. Ever been to one of their stores? Trust me, you’ll never leave that place without at least buying a few of their porch chairs I love them, I got a perfectly good rocking recliner, for $5.75 :pinkiehappy:

Also, AWESOME CHAPTER! Can't wait until he gets to see more of luna, and her guards :twilightoops:

Thanks a lot for your support Ghast! It really makes writing that chapter in 6 hours totally worth it!:pinkiehappy:

Although, while I did write and post chapter 2 on here, it was somewhat far from completion. I'm really glad you liked it, but I... did not mean to publish it.
Like I said, I'm a narcissist, It's gotta feel perfect for me before I really let anyone see it. So consider it a preview/rough draft of the chapter.

Don't worry though! I should have it back on here before the end of sunday!

And Yes, Amish chairs are AWWWEEESOOOMMME

Sorry about the wait everyone, but with college going on and the next week full of final's and procrastinated papers, It looks as if I probably won't be able to put anything else out till Dec 16. I really want to post the chapters I wrote up during thanksgiving, but I won't allow myself to do that without a thorough proofreading by me. Speaking of proofreading, I got a review from the training grounds, and have spent what little hours I could spare this week revising the first chapter (previously the prologue) and have changed quite a bit of the story, so it's worth giving it another read through. This time theres a lot more information given about Doc and less...tell than show, I hope. Chapter two will go down as I fix that one as well, but don't expect it till the 16th. Thats all the updates I have for now, enjoy the new and improved Doc,Chapter One: Review!

Bwahahahaha! Yes, thats what i was seeking! Some pure unadulterated fun mixed with slight insanity!:pinkiecrazy:
NEXT!:rainbowdetermined2:

Can't wait for new chapter.:pinkiehappy:

And here it is, Chapter 3 is up and ready for ya'll. Hope you enjoy! Also, you may want to check out chapter one again, since I've made a few minor changes that should help the story to flow better. (Reviewers are starting to say that it's getting better, if only bit by bit)

Chapter 4 will be released some time next week, but that depends on how much time BF3 takes out of my schedule. I know what your thinking, but It's not an old game if I 'm just now playing it!

Isn't Luna an uptight bitch? Yes i think so, she IS the one most behind time of it all AND THEN ACCUSE OTHER of remaining behind? What a face of bronze!:twilightangry2: LOVE THIS STORY!!:yay:

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