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ASGeek2012


Late-blooming fan with way too many story ideas in his head. Have written before, but this is my first serious foray into the world of fan-fiction.

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An uncertain Luna must again take up the responsibility of dispelling nightmares, but what if those dreams feature herself as Nightmare Moon? Would she be up to the task of confronting her past as well? Or is there more to a particular foal's nightmare than meets the eye?

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Comments ( 11 )

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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it :twilightsmile:

I'm not very good at giving compliments. If I'm not giving advice, it always feels like my words are hollow, that I'm just repeating what everyone else is saying. I cannot find anything wrong with this, though. You even got the nitpicks that make me cringe slightly but I don't feel are worth mentioning, such as the correct usage of "thee/thy/thou" and "who/whom". It's not just the technical side, either; it's also a very well-told story. If I was popular enough to promote this effectively, I'd probably recommend it to someone.

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Thank you very much for your kind words :twilightsmile: Writing Luna's dialogue was admittedly the most challenging part of this story, as it was the first time I had ever done it.

I do admit that I feel this story didn't get the attention I feel it deserves. Part of that is the fact that I am relatively new to this site and thus I am not using it as effectively as I could. I may try adding the story to a few appropriate groups in hopes of getting more views.

A nice little story :)

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Thank you for the comment. :twilightsmile: I'm glad you enjoyed it. This one doesn't appear to be quite as popular as my other stories, so always good to see a new reader.

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Apparently it was one of the first I had I my read later queue!

I don't know why this doesn't have more views; and hasn't been featured yet!?

4Hfan #9 · Sep 13th, 2016 · · 1 ·

This was an absolutely wonderful story! I'm a Luna fan and this was a great topic to cover in a fic about her. You get another favorite from me ASGeek2012!

This was heartwarming :pinkiesad2:

Beautiful, sad and then heartwarming. You win all the mustaches. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

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