• Member Since 17th May, 2012
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Aspirant


MLPG Write-man Relic

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And that's what we call first come, first serve. :pinkiehappy:

Nice work Aspirant, the characterization is good and you left the human a blank enough slate to project on but he still drives the action forward. Your formatting is alright, but make sure that lines of dialogue start a new paragraph; in dialogue heavy stories this can start to look like you're just padding the whole thing, but it's better to do so as it ensures that dialogue doesn't melt in with paragraphs that are descriptors or scenes of action. Well done.

That was...awesome

Another trixie sex story? *adds to read later.
Edit: *Claps Brilliant

Hole-e-shit.

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Thank you, I'm a bit rusty on my formatting so every little bit of advice helps. I'll definitely keep it in mind next time I write something.

oh lol this was awesome lol, I even got a boner!

I only read this be because of the hilarious title lol

I didn't want to read this but it was pretty good.

CHALLENGE ACCEPTED.

Argh! Why is it every time I read a HiE fic my mind immediately jumps to Travis Touchdown as the human?! :raritydespair:

Edit: AND WHY DOES THAT IMAGE WORK SO WELL WITH THIS?! :raritycry:

This was quite the great story :D I'm impressed at your clop writing skills. It's better than some other fics I've read, so good job!
Five mustaches for you! :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

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Haha, you can thank a member of MLPG for that one. I'm terrible at titles, but when he tossed this one out I laughed and felt I just had to use it.

Needs the Human tag, though...

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My mistake, I'm new to fimfiction and though that meant tales of humanized ponies. I'll fix it.

Just read this now. Was a good read.

Congratulations, you have aroused me. I know that greentext is your forte, but this is definitely great for a first attempt. I can't wait for your next one!

"at best you have your brain and thumbs."

I would argue thumbs and fingers give us one hell of an advantage against ponies :pinkiehappy:. Humans would never lose a tickle war!

Wow a HiE I liked, that says a lot, especially with it being a clopfic. Someone deserves a cookie.:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright: :cookie:

I liked it... somewhat. Started seeming... kinda rapey... after a while.:unsuresweetie:

CHALLENGE ACCEPTED


EDIT: I WIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN:pinkiehappy::yay:


-Epicpony

BBB

690271 sequel that show's the after effects? (i am a sucker for sequels that is why i am asking)

God dammit, I think I need a new keyboard...
This fic made this one all...sticky...

ooohhhh me likey

ponychan.net/chan/files/src/133398467296.gif brilliant! this needs to get featured. :trixieshiftright::trollestia:

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Many lol's were had after reading this comment:pinkiehappy:

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Sorry for the delayed response.

I'm not really planning a sequel. This was just intended to be a one shot. I'm not convinced I could make a sequel that carried the same tone without me butchering something or another.

You have amused me.
You shall be spared.:trollestia:

I very much liked the rhyming title.

yummy:twilightsmile:
ive re-read this so many times:twilightblush:

690737 okay now you got me thinking the same thing its awesome

Haha love how this ended and very nicely done :rainbowkiss:

i would love to see a rematch :pinkiehappy:

Neat story, mister. :derpyderp1:

I didn't clop to this, but it was a very good story nonetheless. Wondering why? Your chapter title. I was just listening to and singing along with "I Am The One & Only" by Chesney Hawks. It's pretty hard to clop & sing at the same time :pinkiesad2:

I grant this 5/5 Applejacks, for a good story, neat rhyme, reintroducing me to said song, etc.
:ajbemused::ajsleepy::ajsmug::applejackconfused::applejackunsure:

This seems less like Anon in Equestria and more of a self insert. The human isn't even mentioned by name. Not sure it belongs in AiE.

Best two out of, when ever we feel like stopping.:pinkiehappy:

Certainly a well done story my friend. The "re-match" would indeed be interesting.
Keep up the great work :twilightsmile:

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>Wondering why? Your chapter title.
I literally couldn't think of a title and let someone else pick one. It was pretty funny and just stuck.

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>This seems less like Anon in Equestria and more of a self insert.
Believe me, if it was a self insert, I wouldn't have written myself doing Trixie. It's meant to seem like a blank slate since it's written in second person and meant to appeal to as many people as possible in that regard.

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Fair enough. I was just letting whoever added it to AiE know that it doesn't belong in AiE. One of the AiE rules is the character is named Anonymous/Anon. Unnamed characters don't count.

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Oh, alright. Wasn't aware of it getting sorted somewhere. That's what not being around for a year does I suppose.

Oh? There's a rematch?? By all means, do continue. *sits back and grabs a pop-corn*
-giving a like, t'was nicely done.

Nice I'm a fan of any Trixie+human clop or love:heart:

That was just awesome.

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