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ShadowDragon6


Hey, it's me, Shadow Dragon! I love MLP and DBZ, and I wanted to bring the two closer together. I also made my OC in Mugen. You can find him here: http://shadowdragoncave60.blogspot.co.uk/

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A sweet moment happens with Pinkie Pie when Oak The Shadow Dragon shows her a new spell Twilight taught him, and she teaches him the true meaning of laughter. There's more to Pinkie than most ponies know, but he understands her.

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First, unpublished and republish. Second there are some errors with the spelling in the Bio. Like

A sweet moment happens with Pinkie Pie when he shows her a new spell Twilight taught him

First, annonce who your OC is. Name and such, second "a sweet moment happens with pinkie pie when HE"
Is he supposed to be a she? Or is it ur Oc. I won't be reading anytime soon. Hw. But try fixing that

6621414 Of course you won't be reading it. And honestly, I'm glad for that.

But thanks for pointing out how I didn't put his name in the desc.

6621607 No like, I don't havee time! I would love to. I have 72 books to read

6621735 Oh. Uh... Ok. At first, I was expecting you to be a total jerkface, but you're not. So uh... that's nice. Sorry for making assumptions!

I'll give this a read in a bit

6631063 YESSSSSS! SEE, EVERYPONY! THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU ACTUALLY GIVE MY STORIES A CHANCE!

we are friends now

6631095 Yay! My only criticism of it though, would be that it needs some more detail in certain areas

6631130 YAY A REAL CRITIC tell me where I need more detail and I will fix it

6631196 Well, one of the things that you need to do is describe Oak, I know that your profile picture is your oc, but when writing about a character that no one knows about, you should pretend that your audience doesn't know what he looks like.

6631211 NOW I WILL FIX IT thank you for this

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