A sweet moment happens with Pinkie Pie when Oak The Shadow Dragon shows her a new spell Twilight taught him, and she teaches him the true meaning of laughter. There's more to Pinkie than most ponies know, but he understands her.
Hey, it's me, Shadow Dragon! I love MLP and DBZ, and I wanted to bring the two closer together. I also made my OC in Mugen. You can find him here: http://shadowdragoncave60.blogspot.co.uk/
A sweet moment happens with Pinkie Pie when Oak The Shadow Dragon shows her a new spell Twilight taught him, and she teaches him the true meaning of laughter. There's more to Pinkie than most ponies know, but he understands her.
First, unpublished and republish. Second there are some errors with the spelling in the Bio. Like
First, annonce who your OC is. Name and such, second "a sweet moment happens with pinkie pie when HE"
Is he supposed to be a she? Or is it ur Oc. I won't be reading anytime soon. Hw. But try fixing that
6621414 Of course you won't be reading it. And honestly, I'm glad for that.
But thanks for pointing out how I didn't put his name in the desc.
6621607 No like, I don't havee time! I would love to. I have 72 books to read
6621735 Oh. Uh... Ok. At first, I was expecting you to be a total jerkface, but you're not. So uh... that's nice. Sorry for making assumptions!
I'll give this a read in a bit
6623767 What do you think?
6630979 its not bad
6631063 YESSSSSS! SEE, EVERYPONY! THIS IS WHAT HAPPENS WHEN YOU ACTUALLY GIVE MY STORIES A CHANCE!
we are friends now
6631095 Yay! My only criticism of it though, would be that it needs some more detail in certain areas
6631130 YAY A REAL CRITIC tell me where I need more detail and I will fix it
6631196 Well, one of the things that you need to do is describe Oak, I know that your profile picture is your oc, but when writing about a character that no one knows about, you should pretend that your audience doesn't know what he looks like.
6631211 NOW I WILL FIX IT thank you for this