A tale exists about a ancient force who moved across dimensions causing chaos and Discord wherever he when. In one realm he finally meet his match and was presumed gone for good.
However Marco discovers that you can kill the being, but you can not kill the idea. Now along with a princesses from a different dimension he got a insane chaos spirit living in his head.
Well at least it can't get worse right?
Crossover with Star vs The Forces of Evil
Co-written with The Cat Lord
Current cover art is given by Flygonial
I'm a big fan of SvtFoE and this seems to be a good idea for a story, but you need to go over it paying careful attention to spelling, grammar, and punctuation.
Their
Comma, not full stop.
And we've randomly switched to present tense.
And there are many more similar minor problems like these.
6617273 thanks for pointing some of the problems out
Uhhhhhh, Title, Marco's name is wrong.
Nice story and Great Premise. Question... Shouldn't the Princesses or the Elements learn Discord is now Marco soon?
Moar please.
more of this...plz
...You have my attention. (Insert Gendo Pose Here)
So the reader is Star?
6617310 Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, typos are funnnn
I want to see things get crazy. Like flying parasitic sumbreros that force people to dance and grow mustaches.
YEAH BABY LETS GET WEIRD!!!
I looked up the troll teachers name. It's miss skullnick
MORE!...plz
Great chapter. Will you be going through any Star vs the Forces of Evil episodes? I'm guessing Toffee doesn't work for Ludo yet.
How is the MLP world different with Discords death? When in the timeline are we in both shows?
6672780 well for one the mlp timeline is somewhere around season 3 to season 4
6672850 Ah thank you.
That last one made me wonder if Discord's past life was Sheogorath...
6672850 More please.
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You know what.... Sure why not
Update faster please!
Haha! Subtlety! Nice.
10/10
sooo... Punk Metal?
6736529 Thanks
Unsymetrical stuff the nightmare of every pony ever except pinkie
Also NUE if you're wondering why I haven't been typing with you it's cause we've been traveling for the past 5 days and I can't get on the computer long enough for a good type
6777519 wow just 1 flaw is always worse that a dozen at that point its easier to give up an not care but just that 1 minor imperfection is truly irritating as can be.... and discord didn't even lift a paw.
Sooo……… When is the next chapter?
7039226 when my co-write gets the time we will continue don't worry
more plz
needs more please supply
more please
I'm sorry, but I can't get into this. IMO, this is too random and weird even for SvtFoE standards.
I urge you to continue with this lovely tale, friend! Oh, and add some more oil to it!
Please, don’t tell me that this story is dead. Will it ever be continued..?
i flipen love this idea
wow i love this so flippen much hahahahahahahaha
Foolish Tia and Lulu, don't you realize that order and chaos are yin and yang?
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Oh pah-lease! Aren't you two overreacting a bit!?
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Maybe, but, we may need ta, you know, see things over...
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Heh, if I were Discord's reincarnation, the first thing I would do is kill Celestia and Luna, and then burn their corpses until not even ash remains of them. I would kill them because they are a high threat, due to their astral projection abilities among being able to probably end me via some spell.
Unlike Discord, I will not give the two sisters a second chance. I also see that as thinking of things before you attack, a sneak attack of sorts, an assassination. I am more analytical in real life situations and pretty logical when it comes to planning my game.
Wait. Is the knife think a reference to that "the golden compass" sequel book?
When is the sequel !?