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(Gore tag for self-harm and dark thoughts.)
I know they fake it.
I know they talk about me when they think I can't hear them.
All the promises broken.
All the rumors.
All the nightmares keeping me up at night.
Living...
Is it even worth it?
[Set after Equestria Girls, but before Rainbow Rocks.]
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No! You're not allowed to do this to me! You will continue this story because it deserves more! Why must you torment us with tantalising horsewords that don't last?
In all seriousness, though, this really needs to be continued. It just doesn't feel complete, and it has amasing potential. I'd love to see more work done on it. In the meantime, this has earned you a like and a follow from yours truly
This hurt to read ommmgg nooooo Sunset baby
I think it's a well-written story. Keep up the good work!
My heart, the feels...very sad.
Nice story
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Thank you!
I like this a lot. Not in the traditional, entertaining sense, but, well... it really struck a chord.
6625426 I'm glad you like it! I teared up when I wrote the story.
Simple. Poignant. I've certainly imagined Sunset thinking such thoughts, but actually doing the harm and framing it in first-person is not something I expected. Nice job.
I can understand where Sunset is coming from here, more than I'd like to admit.
Although you made me feel feels, the story does feel a bit… rushed? I can't call it incomplete since it leaves off at a proper spot (though I would like to see you go further with this concept), but it feels like there ought to be more there. That doesn't make this a bad story – I enjoyed it, actually.
6626595 thank you, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Hmmm... Cute profile pic? Draws my attention to the author's page. Story? Not my cup-of-tea, but enough for a like. Story being well written, no noticeable errors of any kind, and excellent competence in executing a story concept? That's slightly above my usual standards. I follow you now.
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thanks !
Sequel?
My heart just broke
This should be continued it has potential to be a good story! I have felt the same feeling of pain and fear and it's sadly given me anxiety I have to deal with for the rest of my life.
I want to see Sunset heal. Keep writing!
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sorry for the late response, but I am thinking about and most likely will make a sequel.
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I am now confirming that there will definitely be a sequel! I have been working on it today, and hopefully it may be out sometime this month or next month! It will also be a multi-chapter story.
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I am happy to announce that there is a sequel! You can read the first two chapters here.
Should be am instead of "is."
Substantative point:
I wholly agree with you that Sunset Shimmer was probably self-loathing and close to suicidal right after Equestria Girls. When you see her at the start of Rainbow Rocks, she's horribly demoralized.
She's not only lost everything, but done so in a way that makes it obvious to her that she was aiming for the wrong things all along.
Do you have a link to the person who made the cover art? I love the art style!
I just finished reading it and I really like it! It's fairly short, but that's okay since there's a sequel.
Can I do a sequel with my OC, and your oc as well?
I send you all you need to know.
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the story already has a sequel, though...
Wow. Short, but well-written. Very well-written. I'll leave my comment for the sequel, hopefully it's a completed story.
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unfortunately, it is not. I cancelled it after 5 chapters.
thank you for this comment though!
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Oh.
Why?
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personal reasons. I did not have the motivation or time to write it.
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I can relate. I've got a few that I want to continue, but have little to no time for it. Summer's coming soon, though, so I'll have a little more time.
This was one of the very best Sunset Shimmer stories that I have read in a long time. It was well put together and kept me eagerly wanting more. Very well thought out with her emotions and everything the character was going through. I think you have done a very well and wonderful job on this fan fiction. I must agree with your other fans of this wonderful story there really DOES need to be a sequel to this I would even go so far to say that there should be at least two sequels to it. So a wonderfully told story.
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awee, thank you! I really appreciate it!
7657364 You are most welcome can't wait to read more of work.
Wow, in some ways I find this relatable, (the depression part) good job
the link iznt wrkng 4 me
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theres not a sequel, I cancelled it.
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The link is broke
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I cancelled my story, sorry.
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Ooh
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Thanks, Obama.
Wow, this is depressing.
Cool