• Member Since 21st Sep, 2014
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StoneWare13


Hey everypony iam stoneware am an artist from canterlot.

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After 18 years of Stoneware struggling to control her troublesome son, her dear friend and none other than Captain of the Wonderbolts Spitfire suggest she send him to a Wonderbolt recruit camp and teach him some life lessons. During his time, he comes across many interesting ponies who help shape his life for the better.
Or so everypony thought…

Edited by Spirit Guide
Art by: http://stoneware13.deviantart.com

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

Awesome! A new story from you. This one looks promising. I like it so far.

I want MORE!!! It's really good.

Looks good.

Well, my interest is caught.

Could use an editor, but interesting plot so far.

Now tracking.

>>AxelsVirtue
I do have an editor, spirit guide. I did say that in the story description

6626432 Problems I should know about?
Ready to hear

6626733 Okay, I just reread the chapter while making notes on what I could notice as someone who is definitely not a pro. I have the notes split into three categories.

1. typos
2. alternative wording that would make sentences flow more smoothly
3. extremely awkward sentences that I can't think of an alternative for right now

Should I post them here in the comment section or would you rather I private message you?

6629117 Not entirely sure what that means.

Edit: Ignore this post. I got it now.

So you said Primary School instead of Elementary School, and are instead of ass. Yet, you said mom, not mum... where the hell are you from?

I meant arse, not are. Stupid auto correct.

6644396
Iam from the UK if that helps

6644396
Iam from the UK if that helps, and I normally say mam

I hope this story gets continued.

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