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The Real Darkness

"You're wrong, I have the power of peace if I can unite all under one banner. When we all have the same goal, paradise, the world will be at rest."


Master Thief, Keeper, Stalker of Shadows. I have many names, and many enemies. I am reknown for being the best thief of this era. And particularly, obtaining items that nobody else could. I was doing such a job, with my apprentice, Erin, when I called it quits after seeing an odd ceremony taking place. My reckless one under my wing had tried to go down there and through a short spattle, she had fallen down into the primal energy and gotten herself killed, now I wake up in my worst environment, a bloody forest, and I have no idea where I am.

A Thief crossover.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 4 )

Right On! I've been waiting for a Thief crossover for a while now. I do hope you keep updating this!

Also, a few suggestions. You might need to run it through an editor or proof reader, I noticed a few word word choices. You might also want to slow down, this is moving a bit fast.

Other than that, this looks full of potential! I can't wait to see more!

6625841 It's just my style of writing unless it's something I decided to look past because it made sense. I wrote this with quite some sleep inside me, so my brain was probably all odd and weird when writing this, I also said ef it and just publish without proofreading in detail.

Awesome chapters, you are doing a amazing job. I can't wait to read the next chapter. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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