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TheFanficStealer


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Blacklight finds his way into Equestria through a series of familiar events. Whatever will our favorite BWMD do in a land where Friendship is a tangible power and the sun has to be manually raised? Surprisingly enough, not go insane and consume all of the local residents... well, okay, maybe one or two of the local residents...

Will not be updated often, as "In a Strange Land" is my main project.

Warning: Character Death, cause Mercer's gotta eat. You have been warned.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 34 )

I ain't even mad. Good start, but bad start of first contact with Equestria

You killed Fluttershy. Expect thumbs down bursts.
Just stating the fact.

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Yeah, but you have to admit: it's a lot more likely then some of the Prototype crossovers on this site. I mean, seriously, I think I read one where Alex gets sucked into wormhole or something, almost instantly saves the Mane 6 and the Princesses upon arrival and gets into their good graces, picks a fight with the Princesses, beats them, still remains in their good graces, some how manages to convince them to let him consume a unicorn and a pegasus, then goes off to fight a dragon, which he consumes... all within the first week of arriving in Equestria. Seriously? You seriously expect us to believe he arrives in Equestria in perfect health, and doesn't get on the wrong side of a group that is practically FREINDSHIP REINCARNATE? :ajbemused: Yeah, right. Fuck that shit. :flutterrage: I'm going with the more likely route: he arrives heavily injured, and ends up accidentally killing and consuming one of the Mane 6, thus creating all kinds of problems for himself.

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I know. I would give myself thumbs down, all things considered. As well as a good chewing out. Because Fluttershy is best pony, and I just killed her in cold blood. :applecry::fluttercry::pinkiesad2::raritydespair:

YOU KILLED FLUTTERSHY! YOU MONSTER!!! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYY........


*Ahem*. Where was I....oh yes. That was a nice chapter.

I'm torn between hating this story and liking it. I hope you'er happy

Fuck it, I'll help ya. I got lots of experience with pre-reading. I remember when the first chapter of this came out, I LOVED it. Sometimes, people... ponies... need to die in order to progress a plot.

1579722 Sweet! Can you start with this chapter? As you've probably noticed, this one is unbetaed. I sent a manuscript to Delta Shock, but he hasn't replied yet, and I'm somewhat impatient at the best of times. Thank you so much!

Also, I'm available for beta services, as well, so if you ever need something pre-read, I can help! :twilightsmile:

1579746 Sweet. I was wondering what you meant when you said unbetaded. For starters it shout be un-betaed. Notice, the dash. Anyways, how do you usually do this?

1579776 Ah, thanks. Fixed. And I usually send the Word manuscript over to the pre-reader via e-mail, but if you prefer doing if from this site, that works, too.

1579783 Yeah sure. I'll send you my E-mail so you can send em to me.

Please don't take months to update this again because this has potential to be one of the better prototype crossovers.

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No promises. I work really, really slowly, unfortunately. :applejackunsure:

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...Good for you? Can you at least tell me why? :trixieshiftright:

SHEE LIIIIVVVVEEEESSSS!!!!!!!!!! maybe.....:duck:

I suppose this fic is dead then?

Secret virus, fluttershy? Awesome :D

that was in my opinion a completely accurate reaction of the virus and a good start to the story!

When flutter shy dies fans go to shit

Well, this is a new spin of a prototype crossover, a very interesting read. Hope you find the time and inspiration to continue it!

NOOOOOO, FLUTTERSHY :raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

YOU BASTARD

Is the momory block, because of the parasite thing that nearly killed Mercer in Prototype 1?

Fic is dead, not updated in 5 years

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Nope. That became the Supreme Hunter, and the story actually mentions Alex killing it (which is Canon, BTB). My guess? It’s similar to when he consumed the ORIGINAL Alex Mercer. THAT was Alex’s first set of HUMAN memories. Fluttershy was (in-story) his first PONY (a PEGASUS, to be exact), so here’s my own ‘Hypothesis’; Each time Alex consumes the first of a new Sapient species, he has to ‘reconstruct’ or (to an extent) ‘recreate’ certain situations to recall his new form’s old memories. And seeing as Pegasi, Unicorns and Earth Ponies are different Pony Sub-Species (yeas, that’s a real life term), my guess is that something similar will happen (if to a (somewhat) lesser extent) when he consumes his first Unicorn and first Earth Pony.

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Who ALEX MERCER WOULD KILL? Poor Fluttershy. :fluttercry::pinkiesad2:😢

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Yup. Believe me, I’d kick his proverbial ass too, if I could. But still, at least he’s feeling some guilt about it, instead of none.

The brain also needs to be mostly intact when he eats it.

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I agree.

Also, TheFanficStealer? When are you actually going to update the story? It’s been almost eight (8) years since the first chapter came out.

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