A Shadow Came Unto Me
written by Aegis Shield
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An interesting start. I'm curious enough to see where this goes. You maintain your usual high standard.
One thing though, I believe that 'rapist' is the proper term for someone convicted of such a crime.
Hm...
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Hm....
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Dark, but fascinating. Also, good to see you writing, Aegis! How've you been?
Huh. He could have just bashed his head against the wall until it was done. But I guess that takes a lot of effort and energy, and it'd kill the story too quickly. Well done
Who could that shadow mare be? Is she an OC or an actual canon character?
Commence read.
Hm.
Reminded me of Pokemon.
Just some feedback/suggestions here
A ran a little water and splashed my face.
Shouldn't it be I ran a little water and splashed my face.
“Just go away. Maybe in five yearsI'll get out, get my sanity back and we can NOT chat then,”
You forgot a space between "years" and "I'll"
Besides that, this story is already amazing.