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Applejack had a complex relationship with her Papa as a filly, and she knew that. But on the day of his funereal, she tries to make sense of who she was as a filly, and what made her so special to him, and what made him so special to her. She retraces a moment she shared with him and that was all she needed to know why he loved her so much, and why they’ll always be together.
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6608788
What did you think of it?
6608791
I'm still trying to figure out the father. It's hard to understand what they're saying (that means you did great). over all, very good story.
6609320
Thanks man. Appreciate your thoughts on it.
It wasn't the easiest of stories to write, with it being a first person AJ and all.
L
6609350
You have surpassed my cababilities by 100% when writing this story as well as you did wether with or without help.
6609364
I had the help of my wonderful editors. Since it's AJ's voice, and since she often uses country mannerisms/dialect, some sentences didn't make any sense, as far as what they could tell, so they gave me tidbits of suggestions for rewording the sentences around. Other than that, I opened up my word processor, made a concise outline, and wrote this story within a day.
I haven't seen any first person Applejack stories on fimfction, so I thought I'd give it a shot. It was worth it, in my opinion.
L
Fisrt off: A DAY!???
I'm writing a story and it took me ike a week to write 1,500 words. (I procrastonate so a lot of things impress me)
Second: Worth every word.
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It usually doesn't take me very long to write one-shots. On a good day, I can get 2k words done, though I average about 1.3k words a day. That is, assuming I'm not stressed out either by editing people's work or because of college. When my stress level is down to zero, which it is now as I'm writing this comment, I'm a rather productive writer, albeit it has to be quiet for me—as in outdoor noise has to be non-existent, though my music is an exception—otherwise I get nothing done.
Procrastination is one of those things that'll always be with you. Trust me. You'll never rid of it. But what you can do is minimize how much it actually takes you away from writing or something else. Just a thought.
Really glad you like the story. Makes me smile.
L
Same.
And I'm glad that you take the time to reply and talk. It makes me happy.
Alright. It's past 9, so