Please remember that there are times to take someone's hand and lead them along... But also times when you must be stern and let them fend for themselves.-KoroSensei
Light Spark an antisocial kid who was a freshman in Manehattan. He then moves to Canterlot to attend the Crystal Prep School. Then he meets 3 friends Scootaloo, Sweetie Belle, and Apple Bloom they all help him become more friendly. One eventually falls for him and how they come together will be a fun and enjoyable ride.
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Finally!!!
Good chapter so far!
And Treble doesn't have long hair just to let you know, he has a black spiky hair like the ones in animes
and white skin, not gray.
Treble: I don't know, I do look good with long hair.
Shut up Treble.
Didn't I tell you it would get approved. Great job Rapid can't wait for more.
Artemis: And I can't wait to meet Rapid, he seems cool to me.
6616909
Alchemy: Hay that's our Bit!
Shut it Alchemy he can use it when he wants.
Alchemy: Fine.
Anyways good chapter I wonder how this story is going to turn out.
Alchemy: Same here.
6616909 Yeah sorry about that my friend edited and he didn't know what treble looked like.
again my friend didn't know what they looked like so actually what's funny is he guessed that Treble was a girl
it was funny when i had to correct him and i'll revise it soon with Treble's skin and color.
6616921 Thanks
Rapid: It's going to be fun meeting all of you I hope I don't make any of you mad.
6616929 Rapid: Alchemy what did we use that was your bit?
6617131 he was talking to Treble an his author for that first part.
Yay! 100 views! in a short amount of time too.
6620434 KO hopefully the next chapter is coming soon for fun and all.
First, don't put your AN's on top, espically in the first chapter where you're trying to invest us in your story.
6802256 KO hope the next chapter comes soon and more fun-loving time.
Sorry I'm a bit late to the party.
At least you commented boss.
That's true.
I wonder if Ledger's gonna show up. If he does, I'll kill him.
6988457 It's okay and if ledger does shows up your not killing him.
6988659 Fine. I'll just severely hurt him then.
6989123 You will not go near him and severly hurt him i do not care what he did to you in the past but you are leaving it there. that's Final.
6990186 Thank you Rapid. I never understood why he hates Ledger so much.
6990234 Rapid: No problem.
6990238 *sigh* I'll just take out my anger and play some Fallout 4.
6990501 Rapid: Go ahead it's better than taking it out on a acutal person.
6990505 That is true, and sublimation is one of the safest psychological defense mechanisms.
6990527 Rapid: Yes yes it is.
6990531 It's amazing how much you can learn from just one person.
It's also rather amazing that you're still sane from hanging out with me.
Well I'm helping you in the long run, so I'll manage.
6990544 Rapid: We'll i'll be leaving you two alone bye Midnight make sure Eclipse dosen't get drunk again alright we all know what happened last time you got drunk.
6990578 That was before our rewrite. Now I'm not sure if boss will write a scene with me drunk in it.
Alright. See you later.
What happened? Why is it cancelled?
7030082 Life's Hitting me hard in the face School's catching up until then it's cancelled for now it's not cancelled forever just until i can find time to write.
7030486 Ah, I understand. I was a little worried there for a second, I thought I was gonna have to rewrite this scene that Rapid would be in during my prologue chapter, once I finally publish it.
7030486 Though, I would change it from cancelled to on hiatus. I'm doing that with my first chapter until I finish with A Midnight Eclipse.
Cool story
7066498 Thanks!
KO nice chapter and funny that he almost blew himself up in science class.
That was a very good chapter man, nice job!
Fang: So that explains the nickname..... huh, never knew.
Nice chapter, man.
So you were the one they were calling Time Bomb. I was wondering who that was.
Aww, I think Coco has a little crush.
Lone Wolf: They call you 'Time Bomb'? Low blow! I'll still call you Rapid.
7076118 Thanks Tiberious!
Rapid: Yeah that nickname was mine....
7077375 Rapid: I don't mind Wolf but yeah call me Rapid or Time bomb I won't mind.
7077205 Rapid: Midnight you think Coco has a crush? Eclipse yeah Time bomb was me because i almost blew myself up in Science class.
7077445 *nods* I think so.
Well, just make sure you don't actually blow yourself up.
7077517 Rapid: Really who?
7077623 *giggles* You'll find out.
7077676 O-okay? (mutters and blushes) I think it might be me..
7077687 *giggles* Maybe. We'll see.
Stop teasing him, Midnight.
Aww, but you love teasing my friends.
7077720 Rapid (blush intesifies and starts looking at the ground unable to say anything.)
7077726 Great job, Midnight. You broke him.
*blushes* Sorry Rapid.
7077739 Rapid: It's alright Midnight I just don't see why she would like me...
7077744 I wonder why I like Eclipse all the time.
*gives Midnight a death glare* Thanks babe.
Hon, you know I didn't mean it like that.
7077764 Rapid: I still don't see why she would have a crush on me though I'm not the best person to hang out with..
7077771 I've killed people and Midnight's my girlfriend, you'll be fine.
Maybe she see's something in you.
7077784 That's the problem I don't know what she sees in me I'm not the best to hang out with..
7077789 Neither am I kid. Just don't worry about it right now.
Just ask her if she starts asking you out.