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Connor the Brony


I write tragedies about pastel ponies. Berry Punch is my spirit animal.

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As Nightmare Moon, you lead your army to sack the city of Canterlot and dispose your sister from her golden throne.

A semi-prequel to The Last Battle.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

first story seems ok

"no one will ever that that away from you again"
should be 'take that'

Well, I've taken the capital. What shall I do now?
LINCOLN CONTINENTAL!:derpytongue2:
*Makes three appear*
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good stuff. Are you gonna write more for this story?

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This is supposed to be a semi-prequel to another one of my stories, The Last Battle, so you could read that. I was originally going to add an ending to this to make it long enough to be able to be submitted to Equestria Daily, but the editing has dragged on for long enough, so I'm moving on to another story.

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Fixed. Thank you. :derpytongue2:

Fun!
Of course I can't take it too seriously due to canon and headcanon issues, but pretty enjoyable for an epic sequence.
I haven't listened to the piece that inspired it, but this fits my mood relatively well since I've been listening to E Nomine lately.

I usually avoid second-person stories like the plague, but this one "felt" very smooth and natural. And, I must admit, I love me some badass Nightmare Moon!

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