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LoreLove
I enjoy writing an array of topics such as horror and more. Enjoy your stay for whatever the reason!
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I watch Megapone for the big stuff, and you for the futa.
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Going to sleep now, but will check this out later.
Wasn't aware Mango shipped anything, let alone RariPie (though the AppleDash picture he did a while ago shoulda told me that much). This was, to be completely honest, fucking hot. It's a cute ship and the story was great to read.
Sexy attire, magic spells, romantic lovemaking, and a heart-meltingly adorable moment at the end. This fic has everything!
One big minus, though: Those penis nicknames were so stupidly corny that I had to stop reading to contain my laughter. Kinda killed the mood.
Still, this one's your best fic yet. Keep it up!
EDIT: Almost forgot, that ball servicing scene was the best I've ever read.
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Heh, yeah, I like to keep it creative. Just a small, personal perspective. Glad you liked it!
Maybe it could say 'Bang The Baker' on it.
This was quite lovely. Time and again, if you have the ball to actually stand up to someone and tell them your feelings, more times than not, you are gonna be rewarded...
So it looks like Pinkie knew all this time that she had the hots for Rarity, and likewise for Rarity's crush on Pinkie Pie--all it needed was for Rarity to actually psych herself up to telling her what she truly felt for Pinkie. And it is a pretty good thing that the Cakes were out at the opportune time--it's gonna be interesting to see that their boarder/baker has a girlfriend in the fashionista all of a sudden.
And I have a feeling that Twilight's got a special somemare that she's studying all these carnal spells for
...seems like there could be a complimentary story based on Twilight and her marefriend who is yet to be named...not quite a sequel but it could be in the same universe. Just a thought 
This is by far the best RariPie fic I've read. It was perfect in every way (aside from a few minor grammatical mistakes). The build-up was decent, the relationship aspect was depicted beautifully, and the overall sexiness was OVER 9000!!!!!!!!!
Have a like and fave!
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Thank you very much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
The only criticism I can level on this, aside from accidentally using "he" instead of "she" a couple of times, is that it's a one-shot romance initially focused on the confession. It serves the story well, but it just feels like there's more...more potential for building the story, more cheesy romance and sexy fun times. But it's a one-shot, so it doesn't really get to build from there.
But that's the opinion of an insatiable romance-lover. The story is very well-written, and I enjoyed reading it all the same. I love to see less common pairings like this, and it's solidly done.
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Thanks for letting me know~ I went through and corrected those little errors. I would do more for it, but it is just a simple one-shot. I try to fit in a nice bit for what it is, though. Maybe something bigger and more adventurous is around the corner!
Great story! Took me three times to finish reading...
THe story was good, but the use of "the pink maned mare" and "the marshmallow colored mare " and so on, had me saying just use their name's most time's when I came across them. I get you don't wont to use their name's over and over you see it's will, irritating kinda. It's just what I felt when reading it.
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Well played, my dude