Twilight wakes up and meets a human/God named Albert Wesker. It's got torture and stuff.
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What the fuck was that?
I fucking hate when fics include pony versions of earth things, mareval vs capcolt? fucking retarded, and don't get me started on the music band ones...
anyways this fic...no
Chapters were short but overall this was interesting. Kudos good sir.
Ehum also...What a twist!!!
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its called a crossover. I only hate when they're poorly done, such as this one.
FINGER CRAMP JAGO!
Two things: One learn to write crossovers... actually that was kind of funny, kind of crappily done... I don't know how I feel about this to be honest. Nice MikeRossisafraud sneak by the way. I can't rate this story because I don't know what I just read.
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I'm not talking about the story itself but when authors put things from earth into the MLp universe and "ponify them" such as Marvel vs Capcom
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SHALL I?
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I'll be done in an hour or so, stick around
[here be spoilers]
The main problem with this fic was a complete lack of any kind of character development or plot beyond a single torture scene. The story didn't add anything to the characters, and the only reason I could empathise with them at all was because I already knew most of them from the show. I don't know whether the ending made it better or worse, because on the one hand it explained the total absence of motive or logic in the rest of the story, but at the same time it made it seem like a complete waste of time. For the "it was just a dream" plot twist to work, the rest of the story has to be really good since you're already putting yourself at a disadvantage.
The other main problem was the choice to split a ~2500 word fic into 10 short chapters rather than just having it as a single chapter. I just found it annoying to have to load a new page after every couple of paragraphs.
Anyway, sorry for the harsh criticisms, but I'm only trying to help by explaining why you are getting so many downvotes. For future fics I would suggest trying to get a very clear idea in your head of the entire plot, all the characters, their motives and their personalities before you start writing. Also, try to force yourself to write a longer fic next time, because that way it is easier to give the reader sufficient background for the story to make sense.
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Of all the problems with this fic, that was not a significant one. If the puns are too forced then it can be annoying, but usually I don't mind those kind of naming puns simply because the show itself is full of them (Canterlot, Manehattan, Cloudsdale, etc).
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Well the ending definitely wasn't an "A dream all along" ending.
And honestly, don't bother critiquing this. I wasn't taking it seriously at all when I wrote it and thus wouldn't be able to take criticisms, even legitimate ones, seriously.
rofl
this is so wrong its funny!
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They wouldn't let me use Dark, Tragedy, and Funny, so I figured I'd just keep it Dark.
I mean, come on. No matter how horrific the story is, having Wesker in it makes it inherently funny.
It needs to be longer.
Normally I love Albert Wesker MLP Xovers, but this was... yeah, sorry....
Remaining neutral on the like/dislike button since Wesker is here.
so they were dead at the end and were #waiting# for the others i will give you that but the rest seamed a little rushed
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It was rushed.
Lol I thought of this when I read it:
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I want DC Douglas to read this at one of his panels.
Hope a review’s okay!