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WinterSoldier


I enjoy MLP, and Spike is my favorite character

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AU (Spike doesn't have a dog counterpart)
A new student has arrived in Canterlot High School a young freshman who's...Spike?!
Everyone's surprised none more so than the Mane 6 And Sunset Shimmer, plus he seems to a have secret that makes him unique.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 146 )

So, with Spike not having a dog counterpart, am I gonna assume Sunset got lucky in her fight against Midnight? Or did one of the girls (presumably one that Twilight interacted with) take Spike's place in calling out to Twilight and snapping her out of it?

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The Girls were able to get through to her

6595351 6595318 It would have taken more than one to take Spike's place (if that was ever possible). Yay teamwork!

6595351 Okay. Just wanted to make sure.

I'm also thinking that this Spike has a male voice actor, I like to go with Jesse McCartney

Not a bad opening chapter. I'll follow and see how it goes.

6597204 :rainbowlaugh: Should I find it funny that Wildcard is tracking a story that could well have been his own?

6597629 My fics take place with Spike being human outside the main Equestria Girls series. In this fic it's clearly in continuation with the three Equestria girls movies

6597629 What I mean by this, is that Wildcard25 is no stranger to writing stories based around a teenage Spike in high school.

The similarity was rather uncanny is all.

Good begining nonetheless.

I'll track and up-vote. :twilightsmile:

6597639 I'm aware of that.

I just felt the settings to be pretty similar is all. :twilightsmile:

Didn't mean to offend or undermine your own work, sorry.

6597656 I take no offense. I understand. Besides It's nice to see more high school stories focused around Spike. I was worried I was the only one who could do it.

I decided to write this fic mainly because well, as much I enjoyed the 3 Equestria Girls movies, the only problem I had with them is that Spike was a dog. Spike is my favorite character of the whole show, so I kind of find it degrading to his character. Also, this is a harem fic, in case you were wondering about the Romance Tag

Plus I'm working on my second chapter

Nice chapter. I can't wait to see how this human Spike deals with all these girls, or how they deal with him.

Nice beginning. :twilightsmile: It gives a bit of curiosity about Spike.

6596529 Hmm, I think I'll do a Reading on this then and post it to YouTube. I've been looking for a good way to introduce my idea for Spike's "Older voice" and this might be it.

A couple typos here and there, but nothing serious. Good work. :pinkiesmile:

Spike's voice sounds like Ventus or Roxas from Kingdom Hearts

I will continue with this story. You have my attention.

You said that he sounds like either Ventus/Roxas?... he acts pretty much like Roxas. But so far, I like.

Comment posted by Midnight Radiance deleted Nov 4th, 2015

This song fits for this.

Not bad for sure but needs some grammar work, particularly regarding dialogue punctuation. I didn't have a lot of issues with it besides that but you should also watch your pacing. Pay attention to detail and be detailed. Don't rush, even if you have a lot of awesome ideas. Be patient and let the story flow naturally.

Comment posted by The Diplomat deleted Nov 7th, 2015

The 7 beast friends

Stop, my ribs! I can't take it anymore! :rainbowlaugh:

6611223 I know right?

Sunset putting 2 and 2 together.

:rainbowlaugh:

6611353 I will now read this story until the end.

okay dude listen, this a good concept and has a lot of potential but I can tell you are rushing the story, so take your time. What I mean is you are not taking your time, I'm a new writer too and I know what it is like to want to please your readers, but people can wait one or two weeks for you to write a chapter. Don't rush it! but don't take too long, just take however long it has to be to make a good quality chapter within the one to two week. First you write the story, then you proofread and then when you are satisfied with the results, publish it.

By the way I am not saying that your story is bad, its a good idea and has potential to be popular, It's just suffering from some grammar issues, lack of detail and pacing, that happens from rushing it out too early. I'm gonna keep an eye on you and heck if you want I could proofread it for you. Just take your time.

That was quite a shocker on Sunset's part.

Not bad figure out how to make it longer just saying no rush

Awesome work. I can't wait to see this Spike's reactions toward the others girls.

this just keeps getting better and better. great chapter

Great chapter dude, can't wait for the next one, hope you make it longer.

Spike is not going to like the next few minutes

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Awsome chapter, can,t wait for Spike to meet the other girls,oh BTW great story keep it up:pinkiehappy:pinkiehappy:

Yo author, still waiting for update.

Well, I'm getting into this. Might as well see it through.

Can't wait for the new chapters; Love it so far! Here, WinterSoldier! *hands out a cookie* Have a cookie!

I'm liking this so far curious about to see what happens next

Like this story so far, please continue it.

I'm still whiting when the next chapter up

"Spike....Spike Drake."

James....James Bond.

So far I like the story and I think that might have been an intentional James Bond reference. But, it's easy to make the reference accidently when introducing a character dramatically.

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