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In Muffins We Can (whether you want them or not)

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Josh is an ordinary guy who's just trying to get by in life and make it to college. Life of course loves making things as difficult as possible, so it decides to change things up for the world and cause mass panic. Josh gets caught up in this and will have to overcome obstacles that he could never imagine. Strange things are occurring in Equestria that could tear it apart at its foundations.



God I hate writing descriptions. Anyway, hopefully this is the first story I'll be publishing here, so take a look and let me know if I should scrap it or if it has some potential. Also just as an FYI, this is not an HiE or Equestria Girls fic. Still looking for cover art so send me some ideas if you do so desire. Oh and don't let the teen and sex tag scare you. It's mostly for language and implied situations.

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Comments ( 6 )

So far I'm lost. More space break between long paragraph would be great.

But so far I'm interested.

“Yeah, yeah no need to yell ya fat old bastard. I’m literally standing 7 feet from you.” I replied with just enough mirth to avoid being insulting.

Maybe "insulted".

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Thanks so much! I guess writing until four in the morning and then posting a chapter is not a good practice.:applejackconfused: Anyway, the big blocky paragraph is fixed as well as several run-ons and other sentences that just made no sense. Thanks for at least trying to read it.:pinkiesmile:

Also just as an FYI, this is not an HiE or Equestria Girls fic.

If it's humanized ponies, just say "humanized". That's easier for everyone.

This story has so much potential its not even funny. I love Celestia's personality, and how she goes about. The plot is thoroughly built up nicely, and I look forward to the next chapter. The only bad thing i have to say is that the spacing between dialogue is a bit messed up, but besides that everything else is great. I hereby grant this story its very first like. Keep up the good work. :scootangel:

Well, i certainly did not expect the events in this chapter, but i welcome them. I love stories of the human world being overrun with spontaneous pony transformation that isn't a Conversion Bureau fic. Cant wait to see where this fic goes from here.

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