I was just minding my business, but the curiosity that is my mind forced me to almost take part in an experiment that changed my life.
I didn't want to do this. Not at all. But they forced me to participate in their "top secret" experiment.
And now, I'm a freaking female pony standing on its hind legs! At least they said it'll wear off in 7 days. What could possibly go wrong?
-Rated Teen for Mild Language and use of alcohol-
I'll follow this. I like the premise.
And if you need an editor, I would do it (I feel as though I know enough of the English language to edit something like this). There isn't really too many errors in it. A couple of errors in tense and point of view, but it looks put together well enough.
This is actually really good so far.
I'm finding myself at a loss here... i do not know what to say right now
Eeh... guess i need to wait for more to get a clearer picture about the events happening in this fic
8210350 Ya. I'm sorry about the major confusion in this story. I'm not a professional writer, so it will sound confusing. Heck, even I'm confused
8210383 confuseception....
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more thicker?
Yes, I’m a grammar nazi. My mother is, so I am too.
You certainly have my attention, here.
Im ready 4 more.
um.. why does she go back to sleep after sunrise? ..
She becomes Celestia.. not Luna.
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So far so good, I like it
A real Shame that this story is cancelled, it is really just the good ones
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There’s a possibility that I might continue this. I haven’t had the time nor the motivation to continue the story.
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Ya know, there's authors that "adopt" stories that the original authors don't want or can't continue them
The story gets cancelled.
So would I ! Where do I sign up for that ?
( Yes I know I sound crazy . ) BUT ! ....... That's just me .
Side note : I'd like to be Princess Celestia or Princess Luna for a month . eeeeh may be longer ? maybne even longer than longer ?