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Just a brony who likes living. Please, don't leave thanks for me favoriting stuff. If anything, I should thank you, the author(s) for writing these amazing stories I find fav-worthy.

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Everyone has a "humane" (pun from Pinkie) counterpart, as far as Sunset could see, both from hers and Twilight's observations. Everyone... except Sunset herself, that is.

But why? Sunset has been wondering about this ever since she met the humane Twilight for the first time, which finally convinced her that she also has to have one. Now, she is spitting through registers, newspapers and websites, hoping for anything that can give a clue. Even though it has been 2 months since the Friendship Games, Sunset is still determined to find her counterpart.

At the same time, in another city far away, a certain woman discovers in an old newspaper something that turned her life around.

Maybe Sunset won't find the answer... but she surely doesn't expect to be found by it instead.

A "what if" story, (if that wasn't obvious from the short description) focusing on Sunset Shimmer and her search of her unseen counterpart. Rated teen for heavy content.

Also my first attempt at actually writing literature. Well, that is, this was the first story I thought of. I only just now got around to actually finishing the first chapter, go figure. Will probably have coverart in the future, when I'm not too lazy to search I find something I like and can use.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 10 )
kul

Pun? What pun? Aaggh! I feel like I missed a chunk of clue about whats gonna happen since Im not that good at english..

Im liking where this is going so far, and cant wait whats the future chapter holds, but mostly Im excited because I am also working on a similar-ish premise about Sunsets meeting her counterpart with a twist as well!
If anything, you might want to lessens the use of (in bracket information) as it makes the narration a bit jumpy

7553784 Well, ever heard of the phrase 'dead man walking'?

Reads chapter, gets slapped with a huge DAMN!!

hope next chapter comes out.

7632367 I hope it was a good one. :twilightsmile:

As for the next chapter... eh, don't count on it soon. I like reading pony words more than writing them. :applejackunsure:

Now I am curious as to what Morning Dew's connection to the name "Sunset Shimmer" is. Relative? Childhood Friend? College Roomie? Not sure if I should have put spoilers on this comment?

How do I know this story won't die after only two chapters?

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You don't? :applejackunsure:

Sorry if that sounds crude, but that's always a possibility with fanfics. I detest shedules for creative things, and actually writing fics is not that high on my to-do list for the moment, to be honest.

But, for what it's worth... This is for now the fic that I sincerely want to finish, and have already planned the story out somewhat. While I can't promise that a next chapter might come soon (I value quality much more then anything else), I hope I sound sincere enough when I say that, yes, this story will be finished. Perhaps not this week. Most likely not this month. But it will probably be finished.

Or I just write all the remaining chapters before week ends, I dunno, I'm a bit flip-floppity like that. But I wouldn't count on that.

mister D. S. Cord, Twilight’s least favourite teacher.

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