Procrastination and messed up priorities, that's me. PM if you're bored.
Practising for the next Young Fliers Competition, Rainbow Dash plans to make history by being the first pegasus in living memory to pull off a Double Rainboom. Unfortunately, she crashes into Ponyville's favourite mailmare, the adorable Derpy....
A story that is somewhat less fluffy than it was originally intended to be.
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Oh you should make a sequel to this
ER MEH GERD!
This is sooo cute! 
great start to your story! rainbow andderpy what a great pairing! this is going to be one fun read and story!! bravo to you on this your first chapter ! ,
Really good read, cant wait for the next chapter!
D'aaww
Double Rainboom. What does it mean? So intense!
Really not bad, but I hope there are many chapters, that is the only thing that it important for me at the moment.
That was just too cute!
bravo to you another fun and heart warming chapter by you bravo ! go derpy go dash best couple!
Nice, I just hope it doesn´t end after five chapters already. Till now I get the feeling it is supposed to be something short.
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I´m glad it isn´t over yet.
that was sooo sweet and adorable! this is just so good of a read! well done to you!!
Practicing* please fix this or it will bug me the entire story
Any good stories of Dashie taking care of somepony and she isn't portrayed as a lesbian? Its getting cliché at this point. "Let's make Rainbow Dash gay so people will read my story"
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"Practising" is not a wrong word.US is not the only country using English you know.
6654908 no shit Sherlock but it looked wrong.
I really wanted to read the scene that Dash actually made those muffins. Conversation with Pinkie would be definitely fun to watch. And all struggles to make muffins which Dash thought to screw it and give up but she can't as imagining Derpy's face when she saw it.
....Or I just imagine it on my own. Oh, hijinks, hijinks...
You're featured, bro! Good for you! And, I mean front page and in the featured box!
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I will admit I squee'd a little
Thanks!
This was a really good chapter!!
I hope Dash teaches that brat a lesson!!
yeah your back! what agreat chapter, all i can say is go dashie, go derpy! great story as always! bravo and congrats!!
Do you have a proofreader or something like that? It wasn't exactly bad, and maybe I just had read to fast, but I got the feeling that it wasn't clear enough what happened.
I mean I think Rainbow went to Filty Rich, Flty got angry at Diamond and maybe even wanted to kill/hurt her, after that Rainbow broke in and escaped with the Filly.
At first I was supprised why Rainbow know that something happened, but I guess she was just alarmed by the screaming, and...
Well I like the idea, I just think it could have been written a bit different, nothing big.
yeah another great chapter to your fine story! simply outstanding!! well done!!
I would like to have a new chapter please.
Poor Vinyl!