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RattPitt


Fanfic writer of many genres & aspiring voice actor. Fluttershy is best pony. Any questions/requests/etc? Send me a PM or contact me on Twitter (@RattPitt).

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Spoilers are in the comments. I encourage them.

Twilight wakes up alone in a dark forest with only a vague memory of how she arrived.

Written as an attempt to write a story without any dialogue, since I use so much of it in my other stories.

Rated T for brief violence and some dark themes.

Cover art by LordSameth.

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Comments ( 5 )

Never before have I read the name Twilight that many times...

Good story! On my favorites list. :twilightsmile: In fact, I may try this sort of no-dialogue writing, sounds like fun!

Pretty good for a writing exercise! If you wanted to improve it, though, I'd recommend tweaking the pacing. It starts out a bit slow, and then wraps up too quickly, even though most of the interesting stuff is at the end.

Were there two sets of humans, or did the mugger murder the victim twice?

One of the creatures held a black box-like item in its hand. The creature pointed it at the other, who held their arms above their head. After several seconds, a bright light and an explosion came from the box. The creature that held their arms up fell to the ground.

A loud explosion immediately followed the realization. Twilight looked down to see the source, which was the two creatures with the small black box. The one with empty hands fell to the ground.

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Ah, dammit. I meant for there to just be two people. Thanks for pointing that out. That's what I get for rushing the second half of the story.

6856039 Oops, sorry I forgot to put that in a spoiler tag. But happy to be of help.

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