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Twilight is packing up her tiny, closet lab at Crystal Prep to leave for her new friends at Canterlot High School. Before she leaves, Sugarcoat pokes in to say something.

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Comments ( 78 )

An interesting story by far, and while I am a proud SugarLight shipper myself, I can't help but feel like this was a little bit too rushed...

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To be fair, story's not done yet. They'll be going on a proper date as soon as I can finish some more writing and editing. So we'll see how soon I can get that up.

7229882 Interesting.

Consider this story followed.

Awesome, can't wait for more. Keep up the great work.

Well. You got my attention. And a like.

Probably one of the cuter possible human couples here. I look forward to seeing what happens.

twilight and sugarcoat yeah what agreat couple they make! this is going to be good! have a like and a follow! well done!

This sounds really cute so far. I can't wait to read more.

Very sweet. Well done with construction and excecution. :D You're good at this.

Wow sugarcoat and twilight nice ship and unique i like to see more of this its really cute and romantic i love it continue its interesting :twilightblush:

I like. And you know, Sugarcoat, nothing's stopping you from transferring to CHS with Twilight. Just saying.

Kinda nice, but Sugarcoat's voice sounds off.

“incompetent nincompoop who organized this by lead actor’s last name, alphabetical, descending.”

I will find this person and bludgeon them with an old VCR/DVD combo player. That is needlessly complex and asinine, and must have taken an hour to figure out.

That's a notch up the Hot Nerd Love Scale.

this is so adorable
now i wanna see more of this ship

Now THIS is an unusual combo. I'll be interested in seeing where this goes.

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Labcoat sounds like a more interesting ship name to me. SugarLight might be more general, but come on. Sci-Twi x Sugarcoat.

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Thank you! I had some fun writing this, so hopefully it was equally enjoyable to read!

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Thanks! I can't not ship, you know? Sugarcoat just strikes me as someone who'd actually try to get to know Twilight, even if she can be a bit abrasive

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Probably not going to be addressed in this story, but that's idea I can use if I follow this up.

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Did you know that I could only find one other example of this ship? One. And it was written after the promo but before the movie.

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I can't say you're wrong. Can't say you're right, either. Frankly, Sugarcoat didn't get enough talking time to get a good idea of how she interacts with everyone outside of a few quips, and it's hard to keep writing quips when you need two people to go back and forth. And you know what? This is an opportunity to flesh her out and give her more character. Maybe that doesn't work for you. Maybe you're on the fence, in which case, stick around. I've got a couple more chapters to go yet.

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Fantastic! The SS Labcoat launch is a go! I can't wait to read more, I never even really thought of the two of them as a possibility. I do now though! :yay:

7232810 And what exactly was that other example?

Nice to see someone other than Lemon Zest getting their romance on, out of the Shadowbolts. I think, other than her complete lack of social filter, Sugarcoat had the least abrasive personality too so I'm a little surprised we don't see more of her.

Looking forward to more!

Well I'm curious to see where you take this. Sugarcoat sounds slightly strange but she didn't get a lot of lines to begin with so idk.

I like where this story is going so far. Also I love how awkward Velvet is, Fits perfectly. I will keep my eye on this!

7243625 Senpai noticed me!

I mean, *ahem*. Soon. It'll be finished soon.

So I see you used Marble and Limestone as waitresses at the Sweet Shoppe. Nice. I can't wait for more.

Enjoyed this chapter! Nice to see the date between Twi and Sugarcoat! And I wonder what Sugarcoat's story is.

Secrets are a mysterious thing. Sometimes we think it helps to keep them, but how many times do we have to look past a truth before all the little lies stack up?

...I don't know. I can't help but think I understand the ironically named Sugarcoat.

another great chapter! they do make a adorable couple!this is one fun story congrats to you!

:flutterrage: The drama llama comin' to spit on my sweet fluff!?!?

:yay: Uh.. I mean, yay characterization?

Sugarcoat may need some GUILTY GEAR musiiiiiiic!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice chapter :3

Sugarcoat got a half of Twilight's parents approval
But she must get the BBBFF, Cadence, and Spike approvals.

Well that escalated quickly

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Nightwish was considered. I wouldn't call myself a fan of any kind of metal, but I can appreciate Nightwish's talent. The specific reason why NIghtwish wasn't chosen was because while I do like the songs I've listened to, the ones I heard were too percussive and Celtic for what I wanted to use as an example. I wanted more of a focus on stringed instruments.

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Hopefully I'll get the rest of the drama out of the way at the beginning of next chapter, and then it can focus on fluff. Deal?

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I haven't played one-on-one fighters outside of Skullgirls. I know that Guilty Gear and BlazBlue are supremely well regarded for their music, but it's not something I'm familiar with. Incidentally, I am excited for both Indivisible and Them's Fightin' Herds.

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We'll work on that.

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But you didn't mention the other Easter Eggs!

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Hopefully the next chapter brings further understanding. I'm a little nervous about it, but I think it works well.

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Next chapter is a few days out! Not long to wait.

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I was just joking around. You're doing good stuff.

7246132 Well I know Twilight was talking about music which mentions the names of the Dazzlings if that's another easter egg. Other than that I have no clue.

Uh oh....this won't end well. Sequel please?

Needs an alternate story with SciTwi and Sour Sweet shipped.

Next time: Sour Sweet and Sugarcoat mud wrestling for the affections of Twilight!

Nah, I wouldn't expect that. Hope, but not expect.

Her mother hugged her from behind, nearly lifting her from the ground. “Oh, my little baby’s growing up! Her first kiss, Night!” she simpered.

“MOM!” Twilight screeched. “We were having a moment. She’s scared off and I’m so embarrassed!”

“Oh, honey, these things happen!” Night Light laughed and ruffled Twilight’s hair in the embrace she struggled to free herself from.

Ah, it's moments like this that really make being a parent worthwhile :pinkiehappy:

I really like adagios and sonatas. There’s just something alluring about them.

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I see what you did there...

what a fantastic story! i truly hope it continues! sugarcoat my fav shadowbolt deserver happiness! and sweet sour back off! twilight and sugarcoat make the best couple not you!! once again an amazing story by a very gifted writer!!

That was it?! It felt like it was just getting started :fluttercry:

Then the other come and tell her they lover her(Sci-Twi)... Then when she gets to CHS she finds out Sunset is dateing her pony counter part.. But hay thats just an idea:pinkiehappy:

Admittedly, I don't ship it, but Twilight and Sugarcoat? I can sorta see it.

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