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... you get a thumbs up for this.
6586541 I do?
I'm... a very messed up person.
That was amazing. I think I have a new favorite story!
Also, why are you sorry? That was incredible.
6586554 Thank you, but it's just that my usual territory for writing is rated-E for everyone stories. I don't know if my general audience would highly approve of my sudden writing style change.
Thumbs up!
Hahaha! Jeez, what is with Rainbow and her unfortunate luck to ALWAYS be cut up by someone?! Nonetheless, this was very creepy, and I like it! I also Liked it, literally.
6586621 Thanks.
6586633
Plot twist: Rainbow had Herpes. Now Scootaloo has Herpes.
6586845
You should be...
6586891
Before I read this.
She's gonna take Dash's skin, yeah? That's what happens?
6586914 Well, no. But something similar to that.
6586918
Okay dokay
So Rainbow suffered? Oh no. *crying* Rainbow can I hug you *hugs you* BTW you are a sick-minded messed up son of a gun and I despise your guts!
6587349 Can't tell if you're serious or not.
6587357 I AM! AND IF YOU EVER WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS AGAIN I MIGHT AS WELL TEAR YOUR GUTS OUT! Besides, I think your lying about not having anything against Rainbow Dash! Just because Sergeant Sprinkles wrote a story involving her death and suffering doesn't mean YOU can, too! You just want to annoy us Rainbow-loving bronies and pegasisters because you're a mother trucker and I wish you would jump in a volcano!
6587372 Yes, yes, thank you very much.
6587372 Seriously, you just made my day. You hilarious son of a gun.
6587389 Why don't I sound serious...
I hate you, screw you, your face sucks. That's all I have to say.
6587394 I know, I know.
Here's a tip, though: You're not going to get anywhere with that attitude, young man.
6587425 Um, I'm a girl. And just please shut up for more than 3 seconds. Can't hear my own thoughts just from reading this.
6587723 I posted my comment an hour ago. That should have been enough time. Also, comments are words you see. That should not have to interfere with your listening.
6587723 So I'd prefer if you'd adjust your behavior, miss. Very unladylike of you.
I stopped reading your story cause Dashie and Scoots are better together not apart. Why must you make me cry over losing my little Dashie. Boo to your story
6588160 Sorry.
Yeah sorry. I can't see Scootaloo acting like this and, as it has been pointed out already, Sgt. Sprinkles pretty much ruined stories like this. Not to mention it needs to get edited.
I just love... how someone decided they were going to write a story and everyone decides just because they don't like it they're going to bad mouth them...
You know, I didn't like it but don't insult the author for an idea. It's actually real immature.
6586545
That was messed up, didn't particularly care for it but you write what you want as long as it makes you happy. And if you'd like any critique then just let me know.
God Bless You
6589645 It's okay, but I do appreciate it. Besides, I realize that I should just stay with my familiar territory of writing anyway.
6587372 Empty threats.
Death by cupcakes isn't exactly the only way bronies have maimed Rainbow. So, by your logic, any other way a completely different pony slays Rainbow Dash can be automatically written off as a rip-off? Wow. You'd be great at CinemaSins.
I love Dash as a character. A lot. But that doesn't mean I hate stories that kill her.
So Rainbow Factory, where Dash herself is the killer, gets a free pass? What the hay???
6588070 Or uncool. Pick your poison.
6588870 True, true. No wonder I got kinda mad at the author of this. BALLZ
6590830 If you don't hate this, you have SOMETHING against Rainbow Dash. I can tell.
Rainbow Factory don't get a free pass. I cried my eyes out.
6598704 I can assure you, I have nothing against the other Blue Blur. I just don't see why you treat stories like this so coldly.
6598996 Cuz they suk. Deal with it.
6605634 Alright. Call out on my story all you want. But I just have one question, though.
Why do they "suk"?
6605656 I think they're jealous of your story seeing as the only story she has is crappy. Lmao
6606198 Oh well.
6605634 ...And?
It's not like other ponies have been used in the exact same way. Cupcakes used Rainbow Dash because it felt the most fitting for her to be the victim of the off-kilter pony that is Pinkamena. Besides, the story was made during Halloween and is set near Nightmare Night! It's only fitting we get this insanity story on such a day! I guess Dash has the most popular vote on these horror stories for use as the victim. Besides, ever heard of Rocket to Insanity?
And "they suk"?
First, nice job on spelling.
Second, it's like saying a Mario game sucks because it has Mario in it! Where, pray tell, is the actual reason?
Overdone might be one, but you can at least give a good, solid reason for why "they suk."
6605656 I HATE horror stories where Rainbow Dash is the one who gets hurt or cries. Have you LOOKED at my profile pic?
6588160 I know right I bawled more than I did when I read The Cough
6611257 Then don't read them?
6612512 I try my best. I can be really dumb, like Pinkie at times.
Wow, this is awesome! I grew up with horror, so this was pretty metal for me.
Good job, honestly.
6997217 Thanks a ton. I appreciate it!
This Is Really Good! And I Like The Fact That Scoots Thinks What Shes Doing Is Normal!
This deserves to be on creepypasta net.
I’m so making a sequel to this
This has officially been added to my big favorites library! Stories become big favs if I have done my list of what needs to happen in order for it reach the big favs category, you’ve done just that with this story. Thanks so much!!!!!!!