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RazBro


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Another lazy afternoon for Rainbow Dash is interrupted as a piercing cry calls for a savior.

Just a short story showing Rainbow Dash's heroic side. A MLP:FiM adaptation of a short story I wrote a few years ago.

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That was quite good and it seems like something Rainbow would do. I always thought RD's friends were a bit harsh on her in the Mare do well episode (they didn't even talk to her about boasting before humiliating her) and this fic reiterates that Dash did have her heart in the right place and actually wanted to help ponies. Nice work :pinkiehappy:

Thanks fellas! I appreciate the compliments. I've been reading these fics for a while now and have been itching to get this out there. I'd love to be able to write a longer story (with actual chapters haha) but I have yet to be inspired by an idea worthy of outlining. As of now I do have another short story-esque idea floating around, but still teasing it out before I'll put it here.

That was very nice.

Ask and ye shall receive! CPR for horses is similar and different from human cpr, for horses you don't necessarily do chest compressions but you still make sure to clear the airway and straighten it out. People don't have enough lung power so you have to use a breather(can't recall the proper term) but it's basically an object that fits over the mouth and nose and has a bag attached to pump air into them. Sometimes you need to have someone pinch the throat so air doesn't go into the stomach and cause issues.

If you do chest compressions you simply do it from the side rather than the front like humans.

Very cute and neat story, I hope to see more from you. Maybe try a collab like the Album?

Honestly Raz this is one of the best Fanfics I have read. If there are any errors I didn't see them. The story is exactly as long as it needed to be and I could definitely see Rainbow dash pushing herself like that to save the life of another pony. I hope to read more of your works.

2017445 Man, after a particularly frustrating night it was quite nice to see this, Flutterbee. Thanks a lot! If you liked this, check out A Few Bits Short for my attempt at comedy. It's still a WIP though. But again, thank you for your compliments!

Well, it was nice to read, I added that other story to my watch later and i'm also going to add you to my watch list. I'm not reading any more though tonight and I'm about to head into everfree chat, maybe I will see you there.

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