Lipstick on her reefer, waiting... for a match...
It all burned down one day, a long time ago. She could only watch, and still she watches in her sleep. Injured, crawling in the dirt, she always sees the same scene. Always the same.
Princess Cadance is weak.
The alicorn takes flight to where it all started. Live or die, the alicorn would put an end to her pain.
*Edited by Meridian Prime.
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Looking forward to more. I like the premise.
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Glad this is so! I think it'll go some pretty neat places, as long as you go with the flooow.
This is an amazing story. I can't believe it doesn't have more reviews/thumbs up. Please do finish this! Cadance and Twilight are my favorite ponies in the show.
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I thought it was a fun piece, so I'm glad you liked it! I'll see what I can do for a sequel; I've gotten the idea to write a mythos for Cadance and Twilight where they face their own demons, rather than nemeses of the sisters. We'll see how it goes.
Cadence will be badass in this story, right?
Maybe I'm being dense, but I've no idea what's going on; I can't make heads or tales of anything after chapter 2.
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Clarity is a big issue for me! This story was written with almost no outside input, so it's as raw as it comes. Thank you for giving it a try though!
Well to be honest it was good... and then I got lost. I dunno why but I didn't understand what was happening at all after a certain point. It's kind of weird. But in a good way.
You know, this is really confusing. Maybe just for people like me you could. like, mark places where one hallucination turns into another?
I am confused with this fic, and it's rare for me to get confused with fics, if there's timelapses plz can you put the time?