Chapter Four: Awakening
Scootaloo opened her eyes a bit for the fourth time today, letting in the burning beam of sunlight into her eyes. The only difference this time was that two blurry figures were on either side of her; a blue one and a gray one. She immediately recognized Rainbow Dash but couldn't place the other pony.
She couldn't move. She couldn't speak. She couldn't voice her joy that her role model had come. It had been extremely painful to choke out the words asking the doctor to bring her, but her request wasn't in vain.
"Hey Scoots...How ya' doing, kid?" Rainbow Dash asked softly, a nervous smile played out across her face.
Scootaloo gave a slight whimper in reply, the only thing she could do.
"Dr. Stable said she's been going in and out, so you better make it fast, Rainbow Dash." the gray mare sounded, and Scootaloo realized who it was.
Rainbow Dash sighed and leaned in closer.
"Listen, kid...A lot has happened in the past few days for me...I got accepted into the Wonderbolts Cadet program, but if I accept I won't get to visit you. You're my number one fan and you've always been, but this is my life long dream. I don't know what to do and I'm sorry." she said, fighting back tears.
Scootaloo wished she could talk. She wished she could tell Rainbow Dash to follow her dreams, because it'd inspire herself to do even better.
Scootaloo wished she could've said something, but all that came out was a small series of grunts which made Rainbow Dash tear up again.
Rainbow Dash suddenly burst out crying and galloped out of the room, the watchful eyes of Derpy following until she turned down the hall.
"Don't worry, Scootaloo, she'll be back; I promise." Derpy Hooves said reassuringly.
Scootaloo just closed her eyes again.
Stats
Page generated in 0.025 seconds
Total duration
993 users online
50,966 hits today, 2,314,256 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Amazing! Keep up the good work!
I had an idea for the opposite of this, actually. But no matter!
This is epically awesome. You've earned yourself a watch and a favorite, my friend.
720899 XD Thanks. My name is a combination of my furry name and Derpy Hooves.
720218 Thanks!
720140 Will do!
721145 Glad to hear :D
725633 *Hugs again* What I'm telling is the honest truth, you do deserve those 5000+ views. Oh I mean 9000+
725725 You're too kind
725806 Naw, I mean it! I've the feeling I've forgot something... Oh yeah.. Watching you :3
725925
726010 I'd just love my story to be just a tad close to be as good as yours. And you've got more than one. Remind me to check your others someday, would you kindly? I've got more views but that isn't deserved at all, if I should say it myself.
726025 I'll most likely forget to remind you. TT-TT
726072 And I'll forget myself.. Better add them to favorites now then.
726075 Hehe
726089 What can I say? Then I'll come back to them eventually.
726096 Yay!
726117 Oh! Thanks for the watch! I'll start welcoming tomorrow when I've got more time!
726399
SPOILERS
This is actually what I had planned in chapter seven.
726765 No, it's fine. I play games with my readers where if they correctly guess what I plan, I tell them it's right. ^_^
726786 I already deleted it
but okie dokie lokie so does that mean I can say the other thing I am predicting about what happens afterward 
727007 I encourage it!
727007 Well, story's over. Did you predict right? (you never told me)
The feels.
ngh scootsy!
