I'm a brony and I make stories. I make comedies, romantic, and sometimes even dark stories.
Eminem hated the parody someone made about his hit song The Real Slim Shady. He hates My Little Pony. One day after a concert he is transported to Equestria and is turned into a earth pony with gold mane, and a white coat. The only way out is to learn the true meaning of friendship. This may take awhile. Rated T just to be safe.
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It's a very interesting story, if I do say so myself. Although, there are many grammar issues and is a little rushed. Have you ever looked into getting an editor?
6669900 Yeah I'm looking for one. It's kind of hard to find one though.
6669915 I can help if you want
6671868 That would be great.
6671872 K, cool
can't stop smiling!
dis gonna git gud
i'm reading this in class, and I think i might get in trouble, cuz i can't hold in my laughs, this is awesome!
i have a good feeling about the next chapter!
question: why is applejacks first thought that he is a changling?
the feels... can't contain...
Pretty goofy, I like it.
Only thing is, there are so many words that don't belong
Overall: 8/10 so far
good concept
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Yeah not suspicious at all! Definitely not like the man's on LSD or cocaine.