Spitfire's Pet Unicorn

Wanted: Expendable fall-mare to undertake dangerous mission.

Moderate intelligence, manipulable ego and history of criminal activity desirable.

Promise of making your wildest dreams come true upon completion.

Picture by Awalex

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zalla661

zalla661 #1 · Oct 19th, 2015 · · ·

Don't do it Trixie! It's a trap!

Beware The Carpenter

Beware The Carpenter #2 · Oct 19th, 2015 · 1 · ·

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Trixie: But she's offering me so much money...

zalla661

zalla661 #3 · Oct 20th, 2015 · · ·

6546714 But Trixie, didn't you learn from the Alicorn amulet?

Don't be a puppet again Trixie!

Great start for a story. I wonder who the target be....

Beware The Carpenter

Beware The Carpenter #4 · Oct 20th, 2015 · · ·

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Target is Rainbow Dash:

When she outflew me for leadership of the team, I let her keep it because The Canterlot Cup was coming and I needed her to win. The Wonderbolts got the cup, and now I don’t need Rainbow Dash anymore.

This is now the official prequel to the first story I did Storm of Secrets. I've just gone back and done some heavy revision on the opening; and one of the things that really bugged me about the original draft was that Trixie's reason for attempting to kill Rainbow Dash was ridiculous. This adds motive; (plus I love the idea of Spitfire as a villain mastermind).

That said; this goes by a time line that diverges at an alternate ending to season 2. By my cannon the only person who ever has/ gets corrupted by the Alicorn Amulet is Soarin; and then it's up to his pet rock to save him.

Coincidently; about 20 years after Storm of Secrets; Rainbow Dash's kids will run into Trixie who has an extremely powerful magic boosting talisman, which works very differently to the alicorn amulet; but I swear I had that planned long before season 3 came out. (I plan fast, and write slow; but I will finish what I've begun.)

Comment posted by The Wandering Draconian deleted Dec 31st, 2015

Zenith Sparkle

Zenith Sparkle #6 · Aug 15th, 2017 · · ·

I'm very glad that I finally got to reading this. It and Storm of Secrets have been marinating in my Read-Later since you published it I think. You have me on the edge of my seat with this one shot, just think what SoS will do to me!

Beware The Carpenter