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TerraZeal


33 year old mother of two who likes to write fanfiction. I haven't wrote much MLP fanfiction, so of course any tips are appreciated. I write for fun, not money, so don't expect perfection.

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Twilight Sparkle knew what being an alicorn meant, but it never really hit her until the death of everyone she loved, including Celestia and Luna, who gave up their long lives and their powers to Princess Twilight and Princess Cadence. With Cadence, as Princess of Love and Light, raising the Sun, and Twilight, Princess of Friendship and the Night, raising the moon, Equestria has been at peace despite Celestia and Luna's departure over a thousand years prior. The loss of her friends left Twilight in a deep pit of despair.

A strange visitor from one of the many mirror worlds tries to talk her out of the depression by letting her know of a new threat to the peaceful Equestria that she and her friends fought for, but it might not be enough, and the beings from the mirror world that prey on negativity may have already got their tentacles in the Princess. Can Cadence and another unlikely royal manage to pull Twilight out of her despair long enough for them to reform a new, more powerful version of the Elements of Harmony to defeat the Sha?

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oh gosh what has made me cry a little.

6580421 Next chapter is entirely Cadence-focused, so you'll probably like that one better, if your username is anything to go by! I'm almost done, just have a few more plot points to iron out. Cadence will be a major character in this, if you love her!

Very moving, it shows the darker side of immortality, with the friends she'd known as a mortal long gone and even the immortal beings having mostly abandoned her Twilight's not freed by eternal life, she's trapped by it, it's become a prison and as a result she's cut herself off from the world and the ponies she's meant to be protecting which you got across very well

Discord might be the saddest, he gave friendship a try and now his first friend is gone, hard to imagine the ever scheming, trickster god of chaos being brought low by loss

>>TerraZeal i canĀ“t wait :twilightsmile:

Blueblood a explorer yes

I must have more

6780407 VERY MINOR with World of Warcraft. The cover picture is of the World of Warcraft version of the Elements of Harmony. Yu-lon is the green dragon-like creature, Element of Wisdom. The red bird is Hope, blue tiger is Strength, and the black ox is Tenacity. Yu-lon is the only major Warcraft character that will appear. The villains could easily be a part of the MLP-verse. They're creatures that feed on negative emotions and spread darkness and evil. A combination of Sombra, Discord, and Tirek (they drain power along with positive emotions). REALLY, REALLY bad monsters. I thought the Sha (the monsters) would make amazing MLP villains so decided to stick them in Equestria, using Yu-lon to cross the border. :derpyderp1:

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Sad that this story died before it even began.

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