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Littlecolt
I write about small pastel-colored ponies and do bad things to them. Ask me about anything, I love talking about my stories even more than writing them.
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There is no shame.
Great read, I look forward to the sequel. Also, it occurred to me that if you'd stuck a comedy tag on this, you could have had some fun with the dolls getting mixed up (especially if Twilight was, for whatever reason, unable to turn the spell off). Alt universe epilogue?
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Perhaps, though that's part of the fun to come in the sequel. ;)
That was quite hot, really.
Could have probably expanded a bit on the actual act, but all in all, I enjoyed this.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Thanks for the comment, glad you liked it!
The sex is rather short, its true! I'll be trying to find a good balance next time. The clop version I did of a chapter for my main fic was ridiculously long, and I think I wanted to go for "brief, but hot" this time. :)
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It was pretty close to the mark.
I've always found equal parts build up and sex work well for such fics.
~Skeeter The Lurker
Wow. I think I like this! Plushie love for the win!
I want to read more.
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The idea just took over my brain! I love it, too.
Also, 69 likes! That's a magic number.
I'd love to see if Luna ever does find out about the spell
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I may have dropped hints about that throughout the story...
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Luna's private passions (which are not actually THAT private hehe) are ridiculously fun to read about.
Honestly, this needs a second chapter where either Luna or Twilight confronts the other.
I bet all the princesses did the same thing~
That was interesting and nicely wrote
I think you did pretty well, good job. 
This fic isn't bad but those tags, specifically lack of control and magic cock had me believing that Luna would be the one growing a cock, having sex with the plushie Twilight and Twilight for some reason being unable to dispel the spell (for the short while that she actually wants to and isn't overwhelmed by pleasure)
Sadly, it was not. Still decent fic though
lol
that's is really funny.
*reads through desc, gets to tags...
Why would you do that to a remote? I mean I get other people have some weird likes ad such but...
I'm joshin' ya, the idea's occurred to me as well with my main story atm, only in reverse. I'll read this eventually.
She knows, Twilight. She knows.
First attempt?! Never expected that.
Really good work!
Your story had beside the clop also a brilliant plot. Never underestimate this combination.
But there is one small, little detail:
Twilight dreamed of Luna. Forget about Luna's dreamwalking?
I had also expected Twilight would ask Rarity for help; she probably knows a lot more about sewing than Fluttershy.
Also you should add a few of this
when you change the scene; Especially in the part where you describe the background of the dolls.
A doll. Going anywhere.
What's next? Do you think the doll is capable of spying you?
... Oh wait...
[I would have add more good scenes, but I didn't want my comment to be longer than your story.]
6553423 Remember when Fluttershy was advising Rarity about stitching, back in Suited for Success?
Yeah, that's what this is referring to.
6553423 I can't speak for the author, but I'm pretty sure he/she DID implement Luna's dreamwalking; It just isn't obvious. Remember, Twilight's wet dreams started small but slowly became so vivid she thought they were real. Who do we know would be more than capable of giving Twilight insanely realistic wet dreams every night, especially if she shared her feelings and/or lust?
It could be just a detail the author included to describe how Twilight slowly fell in love, but then what fun would that be
?
Otherwise, great story, and I really want that sequel. Will it be a 2nd chapter or will you make it an entirely different story?
Nice and fluffy. Could have done without the Futa moment I think...but it fit the theme and didn't feel forced so I'll accept it. Very well done. Looking forward to chapter 2/sequel.
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Funny that you should mention Rarity, because i have seen a one-page comic of her doing exactly this with Spike. Also, "first time" is misleading because he also wrote a clop scene for "The Conquering of Love"... a clop scene that was over 10,000 words.
On another note, I really want to see Twilight being able to take control of the doll. Even better if her size is not changed next time.
6552341 you should do one about Luna thanking twilight personally.
So much stuff to reply to!
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Check out my author's notes at the bottom. I have a sequel on deck. I decided on a sequel rather than doing chapters because I do not know when I will get around to it. I am hoping sometime in November. I wonder if I can talk Dogg into doing another awesome cover. :P
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Thanks. Hopefully you were not too sad!
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The TV kept showing me sexy stuff, I figure that's the closest thing it has to a wang. I just wanted to show it my appreciation!
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At a one-shot with no long-term story supporting it, anyway. I've also written erotic scenes before, though it's been a long time. Back then (1997-2000 or so), I was a rather unskilled teen writer just tapping out his frustrations. :P
Absolutely not. ;)
Fluttershy has a freaky knowledge of sewing. In the comics, she even has a KNITTING DUNGEON!
Dat moment of realization. :D
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This guy gets it.
And yeah, ther sequel will be an entirely different entry. I decided against chapters because I wasn't sure when I was going to get around to it. As stated above, hoping for November.
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Is it really futa when it's a magical construct extending out from a stuffed animal? It's more like a 2-way magical sex toy. :)
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Yep, but this is my first one-shot where I set up and execute in a single chapter. TCoL's clop chapter has been niche, as expected, since no one who doesn't read that fic really cares about "Changeling OC #2 x Twilight", even though readers of TCoL might have been looking forward to that. It's definitely a different feel.
I also think TCoL's clop stuff was a bit of a disaster, only saved due to people already liking the characters and settings.
Additionally, I have written clop for a story called "Cupcake" that I haven't released yet. (OC x Vinyl Scratch, Vinyl x Octavia, OC x Pinkie Pie)
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Yep! I should! Check out the author's notes, I am planning on a sequel.
6553748 6553423 I completely forgot about this:
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Thanks for reminding me, Littlecolt. NB: The line cut off at the top reads, "Nopony can ever find out about what I do here in my..."
>remote sex
you have my curiosity....
I suspect Luna might have been wise to the extra features of her plush Twilight, just maybe.
I really do need to get around to reading your TCoL.
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I hope you enjoy it when you do! I know many people are waiting for the end. (Next year sometime.)
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Good! You don't need to tell me if I have your "attention" though. :P
Hah hah, that's a boner joke, folks.
6554801 one that makes me want to punch you in the boner for making :l ....
I came.
Great story :) Look forward to that sequel.
I'm gonna put pressure on you. I'm not allowed to cum again until it's finished. So don't leave me hanging :P.
6555344 I agree completely
. Hey I just gotta say on a different note, I love your story called my little slave; I'm actually half way through re-reading it 
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But, I have two other things to write before I get into the seuqel to this. It's like, a month out probably. Don't hold it in so long, that ain't healthy!
6555412 I got a whole week of not doing much; it'll b difficult, but I'll try
. I look forward to it 
6555395 Oh wow thank you for the compliment. Try some of my other stuff, I was such a bad writer back then, well I still am but i'm getting better.
6555412 Heh heh :P
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I read your story about tiny Fluttershy and I'm still waiting on the impossible giant cock on tiny horse penetration scene.
6555450 yea ill check out some of ur stories later, I look forward to them
6555452 I'm fairly sure I read that one already... and I too am waiting
Firstly that puts a new meaning to Bluetooth, and I love how you described the workings of magic, the way the spell is cast, and how the spell weaving is done; that was interesting. Secondly, Great story, well written, kept me captured in your story for the entire time. thirdly I have a negative, you have made a minor sentence structure error. Sorry about that, but I picked up on it.
Error in question:
Suggested Correction:
Causing her to moan loudly.
But overall 10/10
I'm not a Twilight/Luna shipper or a fan of, er, plushie fetish, but I thought this was really good and well-written!
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Thanks. Also that is intentionally written that way as an artistic choice, it is not an error. Actually one of my favorite lines in the whole story. As if she's physically grabbed her voice and pulled that moan out. I love stuff like that. "Causing her to moan loudly" just doesn't have that snap, ya know?
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The issue is the phrasing "of the"
It should be "pulling a loud moan out of her"
Ok, no more nitpicking grammer from me. I didn't even notice because guess how I actually read it when I was actually reading it =D
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Oh, hey! Thanks both of you! I guess I was so in love with that line, I was blind to that error!
I demand an encore!
I really dug this and hope the plush theme could be done with the rest of the mane six, especially pinkie, like maybe pinkie pie having fun with a plushie of herself
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Self play with the plushie is definitely on the table as an idea for upcoming fics. I also like the idea of fucking with portals...
Worth noting: aside from the first, every single sentence in your description starts with the word "she". Starting every sentence with a pronoun typically isn't the best form, and tends to make the writing feel stale.
I don't know if the rest of your fic follows this format, but if it does, it might be worth it to read some other fics and see how they mix up their sentence structures to achieve greater variety. If it doesn't, you'll want to look into revising your description a bit, since ideally it should be representative of your overall writing style.
Good luck!
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I Had not even thought about that, definitely interesting. It's probably in the same compartment of my brain that has other bad habits, such as writing paragraphs with dialogue as "character did action. Dialogue, something else. Sometimes more dialogue" - so formulaic. I do want to try and make my writing as interesting as possible, avoiding repetition. I get really caught up in dialogue attribution, too. -_-
Although all that is technically secondary to telling the story, I do find that everything is improved a ton by trying to be less repetitive, for sure.
Thanks for the insight. :)