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She needed to know.

They had a chance to escape, to live past this day... But they chose not to. They chose to live and die as humans. She had no idea why. So, in the dying gasps of humanity, she flies to the sole remaining city... and asks.

Note: This is probably awful. Let me know.

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Proper Prose

Proper Prose #1 · Oct 16th, 2015 · · ·

Looks good. Better than more than a few Conversion Bureau stories I've come across. I also noticed that is marked as incomplete, are you planning to continue this?

Riot Pumpkin

Riot Pumpkin #2 · Oct 17th, 2015 · · ·

6535069 No, I just forgot to change the marking.

snowblind

snowblind #3 · Oct 17th, 2015 · · ·

pretty good... no Humanity is scum... pony magicks beat supersonic projectiles... just a nice quaint story that makes enough sense to not be a crack fic or super dramatic. more emotional than anything else really...