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UglyTurnip


I'm still a crossover crackfic author, but I'm no longer a college student or a filthy console peasant.

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After standing up against her mother, Diamond Tiara has finally turned over a new leaf. Most of the class has forgiven her for her past behavior, and things seem to be moving on towards a brighter future.

However, she still feels guilty about the way she treated three particular ponies.

It's time to apologize.

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Comments ( 39 )

Those feels though. I LOVE IT!! :heart:

D'awwwwwwwwww.

Group hug! :heart:

6535388 Don't leave me out of it, I want in!

This was really beautiful and well done.

MY DAW METER EXPLODED!

For fics like these, they need some new tag perhaps. Wish I could think of a good tag for it, but truly it was indeed heartwarming and honestly a bit mending for them all. Though that may be a good tag, Mending.

Repairing the damage done for past causes.

So many depressing diamond tiara fics lately sharing the same cover image. what is up with that?

6538229 Lack of sad DT pics and I can't draw worth dirt.

6538253 i can sort of draw 1D ponies. but every day pretty much i see a new one. so far yours has done best based on the ratings

6538290 I saw the episode and thought this would be a good idea.

6538326 episode? i heard about a new mlp episode. is it about dt?

6538400 Dude if I told you what happened you would not believe me.

6538431 i would. idc what it is. i hardly watch the actual show so it wouldnt be any big thing for me so let me have it :D

6538460 The CMC got their cutie marks and DT reformed. They did it the best they could in the 22-minute timeslot.

Mabye its just me but

"That was sure some party!" Exclaimed Scootaloo

don't you mean "That sure was some party!" just sayin.

Nice story.

6538704 Fixed it! Thanks!

Yay for more stories for best filly.

6538722 A few other minor grammar issues:

"That sure was some party!" Exclaimed Scootaloo as she and her two best friends left the party.

This is all one sentence, so no capital 'E' for "exclaimed".

"What do you mean?" Questioned Scootaloo.

Like the above, one sentence, so lowercase 'q'.

"Let's just say that the stallions will be all over you in a few years. Trust me," Diamond tried to laugh and lighten the mood, but it only made things a little awkward. She shook her head and proceeded.

The comma after "Trust me" should be a period. That "tried to laugh" bit is an action tag, not a conversation attribution, so new sentence.

6539413 Thanks for the help. They should be fixed now.

*Gets shot right in the feels.*:pinkiesad2::heart:

Ooooh. Shot through the heart. And you're to blame!

Spectacular story you have here. I do think that all along in the show Diamond Tiara yearned for what Apple Bloom has, a loving family.

Amazing job!

Brilliant! That's so far the only fic I've seen that's really dealing with it how Diamond Tiara apologizes for the harm she did do them!
Why aren't there more stories like this?
There are only two things I can criticize here, the end comes a bit abrupt and could use a better and slower flow, and that Diamond Tiara says to Applebloom that she did treat her the worst of all of them, while she actually treated Scootaloo the most cruel of all of them when picking on her for being unable to fly.
Otherwise, this story is excellent! There need to be more of that kind of stories!

6586515 True, but I think I'll let somebody else write that.

6587879 Well, if you ever decide to give it a shot, I wish you the best of luck. :twilightsmile:

WHO WOULD BE SO HEARTLESS AS TO DISLIKE THIS HEARTWARMING STORY!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

6634400 (TheBestGamer)
Wait... WHAT ?!, how in the name of Celestia can someone dislike that? :applejackconfused:
Maybe he think that was the dix-I-like button ? :rainbowhuh:
But if that wasn't that... well, he's a motherbucker :flutterrage:
PS : I am french, and "dix" = 10

6634400 Someone who clearly doesn't like reformed Diamond Tiara, or doesn't think her reformation is believable.

Awww, this actually brought tears to my eyes....good job! :heart:

I don't always comment on stories I like. But when I do, it's because they make me feel. And this did just that. Well done.

Thank you for writing a story like that.

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