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godzillafanboy


The Stallion son of a earth pony mare and an Eastern dragon (think Shenron from Dragonball)

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Twilight Sparkle is put to the task of exchanging places with a young princess of the country of Neighon to bring a peace treaty between the two countries, but before the foreign princess is to sign they must experience the other's country.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 46 )

take a like, ill be watching, and go for it, henshin!

6529064 next chapter should be up this Saturday, have to write when I don't have school

6530048 cant wait, I wanna know, all the M6 would get genesis drivers and lock seeds ?

HaHa!!! I love the expression on Shining, his parents, and Celestia's faces when the ZeroLiner when into the Sands of Time!!! :trollestia:

6532257 Nope just normal flying train travel this time

Will Natsumi be a spoiled brat here to?

Also please tell me twilight and the mane 5 will get Kaito kumon as a body guard please

6532966 Was going to use Denliner, but Momotaos, Urataros, Kintaros, and Ryutaros would freak everyone except Discord out, also Owner wouldn't let them on without a ticket or pass

Comment posted by godzillafanboy deleted Oct 17th, 2015

6537587 That's true, and hope you enjoy the rest of the story

u seem to have a slight problem with doing dialog, every time a new character speaks is supposed to be a new paragraph, but u mush together two speakers in the same paragraph and that makes it aconfusing if u dont read it throught twice or so

also,

Identified Kamen Rider Series So Far:

Gaim
Kiva
Den-O

6537991 well, r u only talking Riders, or will there be a few Sentai as well? oh, and if ur going to use an area based off of our Japan, u might want to sprinkle in some honorifics into the natives speech. for example, the Emperor would be refered to as name-samma, showing his rank and the great respect others have for him. there r writers on this site that use such honorifics effectively that u can learn from. the Princess especially, has to be using them in Equestria. if u have seen a lot of Kamen Rider subbed episides, u will have seen these honorifics used...extensively. to not use an honorific is generally reserved for those who know each other extremely well, like lovers for example

6538023 Well, the honorifics will be in Natsumi's chapters and I'll be putting the honorifics where they fit for the citizens of Neighon, an exception would be Kaito regarding Kouta since it's in character.

6538037 i have not seen any of Gaim save for assorted clips but...

6538695 Just wait for what he trains them.

6533265 I'd rather have the Elric Brothers...

and theres another Toku reference, all of the instructors (save one, and Kaito of course) hail from a Super Sentai...Gekiranger

both Kaito and Zack come from Team Baron, featured in Kamen Rider Gaim

6816811 You forgot Ryou, the heavenly fire star

6816772 do you not know who kaito kumon is!

He's what would happen if Vegeta and Sephroth had a love child

6816967 I'd need to put Nago-san in to have them do that.

6817100 and he isn't going to be........he's fucking Nago-san!

6816818 i am not as familiar with Dairanger, but i do know Gekiranger and i just finished all of Gaim a few days ago...still need to watch the movies though...

6817181 What I meant is that I would need to introduce him sooner than I had planned.

6817676 oh okay.......can he still say his catchphrase though somehow

6817685 I'll try, I was going to have him be like in the show a bounty hunter, but that might just have to change a little bit.

6818176 keep him a bounty hunter i assume there's some kind of kaiju situation have him uunt one down in front of the m6

if i am not mistaken, thats Blade and Wizard added to the Rider References...

6838348 Half right, Haruto Souma, Kamen Rider Wizard
Shinji Kido, Kamen Rider Ryuki.

6838517 so gekired sired kamen rider ryuki and kamen rider wizard

6839257 oh totally got confused there.

*i can't remember the sentai names so i have to use the American name* so the red thunder dragonzord had sex with wizard dragon and gave birth to the red dragon from ryuki.

Which ones the girl because I'm pretty sure wizardragon was always depicted as male

6839264 Ryuuseioh (red dragon thunderzord) is the father of Dragredger (Ryuki) who is the wife of Wizardragon (Wizard) who are the parents of Spike.

6838517 it was the card that threw me off, two Rider have a card gimmick...anyway, ur well on ur way to representing all seventeen Heisei Riders...gonna throw in the Showa Riders as well?

6839279 oh okay as you can tell I'm more kamen rider than sentai

6839296 Don't you mean three? Ryuki, Blade, and Decade.

6840230 want to add DiEnd to that list? in any event, r u only using Heisei Riders for this or will u dip into the Showa Riders as well?

6840783 First, I was counting rider series, second, I was going to put some nods to the showa era in later on.

6841013 soka, good to know they arnt getting the short stick, even if Black RX got that horrible adaptation for American shores...i am so glad that Kamen Rider has not suffered the same fate as Super Sentai did by being adapted...i can just see the mess that would be made of a great series like W...

6841170 I don't judge a series by it's adaptation, that would just be unfair to the original, it'd be like me comparing Gridman to Superhuman Samurai Syber squad.

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