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Apple Heart



Diamond Tiara has an internal battle because of her mother. Can she hold it together? After all, a Diamond CAN'T break.

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:rainbowderp: You really surprised me there.

And that last sentence...
I've been waiting long to read a good fimfiction on our `polished diamond`.

Imagine if Carol was involved...

"Just look at the flowers, Spoiled..."


6515182 Thank you! :twilightblush:

6514851 :rainbowderp: Eeyup. :derpytongue2:

6514824 Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy:

I'll be reading this soon... but first: Looking at the title, I suppose you could say... Diamond (Tiara) is Unbreakable?

6519528 Well, she's trying to be.

6519615 Really? Thank you! Is there any advice you'd have on how to improve it? :twilightblush:

6519706 Right, I remember something about starting a ew paragraph every time you switch between action and dialogue, but wouldn't that make most of my paragraphs too short? Is there another way? As soon as I said that, I felt like Sunset and Midnight Sparkle.

Holy bucking shite. That was brutal...

6522896 Why, thank you? I think? :twilightblush::scootangel:


the cmc need to know the truth more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! we need a happy ending

6539252 :twilightblush: She DOES eventually get her happy ending in the episode though. :pinkiesmile:

6539575 to this au story my friend

6539577 More like abuse dressed up as deserved punishment...Good nonetheless

6539634 ...You want me to re-write my story? :unsuresweetie: Why..? :fluttercry:

6539737 That's what I was going for. That's why it's so dark. Diamond has been conditioned to think that her being abused is okay, and even good for her. :twilightblush:

6540339 I never said that maybe another chapter diamond tiara can get the help that she needs because clearly she's getting abused enough that she could die I mean she got cuts that have almost bleed out she needs help I feel that this story needs a sequel maybe another chapter I do not know but I love your stories and I hope you keep writing

6540341 so sad....and i have to admit...This is well written and accurate....Well done sir

6541172 ...Maybe, but I intended this to just be a one shot. I'm not really sure what the story line would be for a sequel like that. If you wanted, though, you could always write a story. Just give it your own twist! :twistnerd: And thank you! :pinkiehappy:

6541435 Thank you. :twilightblush: And it's ma'am. :trixieshiftright::rainbowlaugh:

6541493 i can not i do work that will not let me have time for it sadly and i do not want to leave a unfinished story so it just cannot be give us a small one chapter where we know diamond tiara at least get help please i know you can do it

6541497 oh....ok ma'am

6541514 ...Alright. You win. :unsuresweetie: I don't know how well I'll be able to write it, for it's not my specialty genre... But I'll try. I'll link it to your comment when I post the new story, okay? :twilightsmile:

6541640 one more thing alway believe in yourself story idea cmc find out about the abuse and get help for her they are called every day heros

6541778 Uhm... I think that'd be a bit much. I don't think Diamond would appreciate it if everypony knew she was being abused. :derpytongue2:

:moustache:6541847 how about just the cmc then twilight

Very realistic portrayal of physical abuse. Now I feel sick..... This fanfic hit a bit too close to home for me.

Edit: Saw that it's your first fic. Well done, my fellow author. Well done.


That comment..... More traumatizing stuff was not what I needed after this fic! :fluttercry:

Fics like this make me hate Spoiled Rich all the more.

6564007 I'm sorry.. :fluttershysad:
And thank you. :pinkiesmile:

6564650 :twilightblush: Yeah... I hope you liked it though. :twilightsmile:


It's okay, it's not your fault. In fact, it's good that you wrote this. People need to have more awareness of such things.

6566745 I did like the story, I just can't stand Spoiled Rich.

I like this a lot. It is very dark and disturbing but gives reasoning for the monster that the show couldn't show. Heh heh. That the show couldn't show. :rainbowlaugh: ... I try too hard... :derpytongue2: Thanks for writing. :pinkiesmile:

6575243 *Nose hurts from facepalming my glasses onto the bridge of my nose really hard* :twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush: Thanks, Mr. Chill. You certainly ARE chill! :D ... :D ... :facehoof::twilightblush::twilightblush::twilightblush:

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