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[hide message]Somehow, I manage to write sad fluff. I'd be concerned about my mental health, but I'm too busy writing.
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Nice story!
Keep going!
This was a pleasant surprise. I saw the synopsis and immediately assumed it was some uninspired oneshot comedy, but it really couldn't have been any further from it.
I admit I never thought of Celestia using alcohol as a coping mechanism for her immortality blues, but the way it was presented here made it seem quite convincing. And the resolution of this story was satisfying; Celestia has been drowning her sorrows and regrets and in doing so she's blinded herself to all the good she has done, too. Sometimes it takes the student to let the mentor know how much she has actually taught and what difference she's made.
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Alright biggest and only real problem was that your fic was 99% broken paragraphs / improperly structured paragraphs [it's seriously bad when a reader doesn't know if a paragraph just needs to be moved down a line [properly spaced], or is simply just broken.].
But other than that it was a cute-ish story.
Surprisingly emotive. Nicely done. I think you did the points Celestia talked about well. It felt like these were things she could say.
Wow, this was prett good, I'd never imagined Princess Celestia drunk! Just wow. Good job, bravo!
Nice story. Beautiful ending.
Just beautiful...
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Oh, and these ribbons:
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Tag-A-Long's Book Club
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The Goodfic Bin
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Oh, this gave me feels. Usually alcohol is used as a joke, but here...
Damn, I wanna give Celie a hug ;-;
Great read good sir or madam. I love stories where the ever stoic invicus sol breaks that mask. I would be very interested to see this continue, this would make a fantastic story world
Started out funny and got surprisingly sweet.
Very well done.
Celestia: YOU MY CHILD! WILL BE THE *Hic* BEST *hic* PRINCESS OF... What are you princess again? NVM WHO CARES! :D
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I would be interested in seeing more from this, even if it's just oneshots rather than a narrative.
One of the few fics that has brought me to the verge of tears. Very nicely done.
You almost got me with the tears mate, I loved it! You inspire me so much with your writing skill