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A group of friends on a road trip to California for the summer, their trip goes takes an interesting turn when get lost after they stop to rest. One wrong turn onto side streets and soon they find themselves somewhere in the middle nowhere, only to discover the town of Ponyville and some unhappy ponies. Their vacation is going to have put on hold, but they can't wait to get back on the road.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 12 )

Im really loving the character personalities! Except I feel like candy's is the only one I don't fully know yet.

I am really liking this. Good on description and characterization. Overall grammar is good. KEEP POSTING! I want to see more of this.

I'm loving this story. Please continue.

That part when the narrator was being sarcastic with Candy was hysterical. Please keep going with this story, I am always looking forward to updates!

I look forward to seeing more.

i wonder what will happen next

This was a good chapter. MOAR.

Other than taking the Lord's name in vain, this story isn't too bad. I hope this updates soon :twilightsmile:

Huh. A little anti-climactic. But still good.

Hmm. I didn't think it was going to end like that. I think the story benefits from that, however. Doesn't mean I don't want a sequel. Whenever I favorite a story, that means I want a sequel.

7102510 There isn't anything exciting in the story to begin with. Just a handful of blokes getting their act together. That's really all there is to it.

This story is so underrated it deserve more reads

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