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My Little Love Story

Tunestorm is sent to Ponyville on a mission to find something "missing." However, Celestia doesn't tell him what he needs to find. The young stallion then finds himself in love with a mare named Fluttershy.

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KartalTheWriter

KartalTheWriter #1 · May 31st, 2012 · · ·

At first I was like "whoa, this is moving really fast" but then it ended and he was in Canterlot again and said it was all a dream and I was like "that makes sense now". I like it. But then I saw the alternate ending. I like the first ending better. It seems stronger, but do what you feel works. I don't want to squash your creativity.

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