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Jongoji245


A fellow Brony, Bluthy (Don Bluth Fan), Dinosaur lover, G-Fan, and an animation student. I worked on fan fiction in Deviantart, and would like to submit them, revised, to you.

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Seventeen years ago, the human Sunset Shimmer was born into the world. But the first eight years of her life was not the same as most of her classmates. Nine months a year, school was her only get away from her adoptive mother Hydia and sisters Reeka and Draggle. But that began to change when a new family moved into town. Having made an anti bullying group at school, Sunset and Flash take him and four others under their wing. Slowly and surely, Sunset will realize that friends can be more than just friends.

Takes place in the New Timeline over a span of 17 years before the events of the New Timeline's Equestria Girls as an alternate version to "Other Voices."

Promoted 1/18/2016

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 6 )

Sorry, but I can't read any further than this.

You're constantly confusing your and you're, there their and they're, using other wrong words, and your 'story' has nothing whatsoever to do with Beast Wars or My Little Pony other than using Sunset Shimmer's name and the word Maximal in the title.

Furthermore, you blatantly ripped off the whole rampion enslavement.

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In this context, "Maximal" is a group like that of the Rainbooms, Dazzlings, and Crusaders, not like that of the Transformers.

Then again, I should find me an editor. I always write these stories and check them alone, and even then, I'm not perfect.

it would be nice to know what ANY OF YOUR STORIES ARE ABOUT just saying this is a new time line and my head canon tells me nothing WHAT IS THE PLOT OF IT AND THE PLOT OF ANY OF YOUR STORIES

DAUMN, does equestria girls: rebcon whatever story have a shit tone of prequel's!!!????

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In a sense yes. :twilightsheepish:

Originally, I planned to have the "The Perfect Dinosaur" through "Heir of the Sands" to be in one story, but after talking it over in the Crossovers Group, one person suggested it to be each stand alone story so as to not confuse the audience. Thus the multitude of prequels leading all the way through to "Equestria Girls: The Rubicon."

>>Jongoji245
You should check out my story it's my first story so give me your opinion the name is" THE RISE OF KING FURGO"

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