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Scarheart


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One of my first true attempts at an HIE romance-type story. Mostly, it's just a slice of life, a typical mornings, afternoons, evenings and nights involving a family. A very important family.

It's going to be really sappy and really cheesy.

Posting the chapters where I think they'll fit. You don't know where in order they'll pop up!

Join on the epic journey of a man and his daughter going to breakfast in Canterlot! Will they prevail? Will they have toast? Will there be dancing? Love blossoms, marriage! Skipping everything in between and focusing on those moments in life when everything that has been fought for, cried for, believed in, raged against, forgiven, forgotten...

...happens...

Why, the chapters seem to appear in reverse order... Why?

I was half asleep when I initially wrote this. It was a fun little exercise and I think I feel a little naughty for writing it, and not for any naughty ways. I hope you enjoy it!

This has now been reopened! Each chapter can stand alone, but they are all connected! Please, enjoy!

Rated "T" because of grown-up talk. Sort of.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 36 )

Haven't read it, but faved and liked anyway! Cause I'm a sucker for family fics.:raritywink:

I'll read this tomorrow. Good luck with the new story! :pinkiehappy:

I loved this, it was amazing. I wouldn't mind you writing more like this, maybe expanding this story?

Good story! Also by inadvertently mentioning Chrysalis you left the door open for doing one about that too unless that was your intention, which would be a fun read!

6505599 I am debating it. Thinking of doing light, fluffy fun stuff like this instead of the darker stories I normally do.

6507068 Nope. Would have tagged. Thought about it, though.

6504672 I thought I might start at the beginning.

Wow, I can't believe I haven't commented yet!

Well, this was an interesting change of pace. Not that I am complaining, though. Well done, once again.

~ Neon Lights

This story has caused me to transcend my mortal form and become the quintessence of diabeetus.

I had gained some form of diabetes from this story with all the familial/romantic love. It's really adorable. And sometimes very cheesy.

Also;

The finest chefs in Canterlot had toiled for three months in teaching Princess Luna how to cook without burning water.

And that breaks physics. Good job Lulu, you're on par with Pinkie now.

Anyway, good feelsy story so far. Especially good for reading on a rainy day. +1 like.

6511511 I believe there can't be honest love without a little bit of cheese.:moustache:

Somehow, I knew that song would make its way into the story. I think no less of the story for it.

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"Oh, I would imagine you would have sought out that horrid changeling queen..." Luna shivered.
"Chrysalis isn't that bad." Luna huffed her disagreement.

Whos talking here.

Nice btw! Though a little fast.

A really sweet fic, i greatly enjoyd it.

All this cheese is making me chubby. Good story though, keep it up!

No idiots were harmed in the making of this chapter.

That's only because you didn't try hard enough! :rainbowlaugh:

The kawaii meter can not handle this story.

This is a well written story, I love it:twilightsmile:

Daww, and yes daughter like mother indeed. :rainbowlaugh:

Didn't the first chapter specify he was with a changeling queen that wasn't chrysalis? And that he wasn't being siphoned or anything.

7112569 Yes. Chrysalis handed Friend over to another queen. A queen that has tried very hard since to avoid being in the middle of titans.

She'll show up at some point in the story. I haven't forgotten about her.

Damn thats an interesting first chapter Ill continue this.

Thats actually a first Im reading a story when the child is human, fully human, sure the eye color is rare and the hair is naturally pink but it seems to be perfectly human all things considered. I'm curious to see how this goes!

Ah yes sunshine the cake loving princess haha I'm curious to know If she has any carnivorious tendencies shes shes pretty much human, or if shes capable of eating things like flowers?

Oh Luna always the ever troll hehehe

Celestia adjusted her wings, ruffled her feathers. Her tail flicked as she knew her little bundle of joy had turned the kitchen into a scene of utter chaos. The kitchen staff would have a collective heart attack and her head chef would no doubt spontaneously combust. Hop Chop was prone to fits of righteous rage when it came to a dirty kitchen. The unicorn was renowned for his temper, which was almost as legendary as his cooking. He made a magnificent Prench onion soup and it had become a favorite of Celestia’s husband.

Dear Sir,

You have ponified Gordon Ramsey. He is coming to tell you to fuck off, and yell about your messy kitchen.'Your kitchen is a warzone!'

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I have to admit, this isn't my usual cup of tea... but I'm liking these peeks into their lives more and more. You certainly have a knack for writing, and you keep the chapters short and sweet.

Any chance you might consider continuing this? I'm finding it... relaxing, after all of the action and naughty things I'm usually deep in...

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