Neon the abnormal dragon

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Neon light is a dragon that comes from a world full of mutants, robots, and other horrible things. one day his friend Ghost invents a planet teleportation device, like the idiot he is gets teleported to Equestria.

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I REGRET NOTHING! (Prologue) · 7th Oct 2015 · 1,004 words
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The dragon that appeared in Ponyville · 15th Oct 2015 · 3,008 words
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Mutation Madness · 18th Dec 2015 · 2,280 words
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The Overlord watches · 31st Jan 2016 · 198 words
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Texus

Texus #1 · Oct 7th, 2015 · · · I REGRET NOTHING! (Prologue) ·

Not sure what to think of the characters yet, but I guess I give them a chance. However, I hope it is only him in Equestria, I somehow like it like that.

Beastly Dragon

Beastly Dragon #2 · Oct 8th, 2015 · · · I REGRET NOTHING! (Prologue) ·

6502355 Thanks I guess?

Texus

Texus #3 · Oct 15th, 2015 · · · The dragon that appeared in Ponyville ·

"Uuuh, my name is Neon Light, pleased to meet you." He feels uneasy about this. She hugs him and starts to nuzzle his chest.
"We're gonna have so much foals." she whispers.

what?
At first I wanted to ask why she waasn´t scared, now it is only funny.

'What the ever loving fuck?!' Neon quickly rises and drags Applejack walking to town. "IT WAS FUN MEETING YOU BUT I THINK I HEAR THE NOPES NOPEING THE FUCK OUT OF NOPES."

poor Dragon, your probably learn to like her sooner or later
Well I suppose probably not.

"Well you can sleep at the barn if you like." Her cheeks turn red for some reason. "O-or you can sleep with me."

I noticed, that I start to like it, but it is odd how many Ponys start to be focused on sex in different storys, in some storys more than others.
Then again, I don´t think this has to mean anything yet, Fluttershy made it much more obvious.

Till now I think it is a good story, I wasn´t sure last time, but now it looks like I could like it.

Beastly Dragon

Beastly Dragon #4 · Oct 15th, 2015 · · · The dragon that appeared in Ponyville ·

6529466 I'm glad you liked it

Jacknife557

Jacknife557 #5 · Oct 20th, 2015 · · · The dragon that appeared in Ponyville ·

seems pretty good

Texus

Texus #6 · Dec 18th, 2015 · · · Mutation Madness ·

"Don't worry bout it sugarcube." She feels something wet between her hind legs "I-uh, I need to go." She gallops off hoping Neon didn't see her dripping mare hood. "Stupid sexy dragon." She utter under her breath.

I nearly forgot that this is part of the comedy from this story, but I like it, in this story I honestly like it. However I hope he doesn´t get the reaction frmo everyone.

For his entire life, Neon always hear music. Like in battle or just walking around. "Better hope Fluttershy doesn't find me here." While walking, Some ponies waved at him and other gave him this weird half lidded look. 'Was that suppose to be an angry look? What did I do?' He bumps into something. He slowly looks to the right,

I hope you didn´t wanted to make it look like an Harem story.

He's alone...I'M ALONE TOO!' He stands up and bends backwards launching himself towards the stallion's table. He face plants on the table feeling regrets in his jaw.
"WOH! You alright?" The stallion says in concern. Neon slowly looks in front of him and smiles revealing his bloody broken teeth. "Oh my Celestia! You're bleeding!" Neon puts a claw in his mouth and see's blood on it.

...........meh

Neon ended the call. "Welp....that happened." He looked behind him. Everypony were quivering in fear by the loud monstrous roar. "What? He loves doughnuts." He goes back looking into the laptop until the doors bust open.
"What was that?! A monster attack" Twilight looks around in fear. Spike see's Neon and walks towards him.
"Neon did you hear that roar?" Spike asked looking around in fear of the monster that roared.

Not bad, but I believe not exactly everything is funny for me.

......Maybe it start´s to look to random for me, but this wasn´t my most favourite chapter from this story so far.

Radioactive Dragon