(The following is in 3rd person)
Jason had hit the slanted roof on the head and was beginning to fall close the ground when a Purple pony has flown to catch Jason, this pony was none other than Twilight Sparkle, whom had lowered Jason to ground level without causing further injury.
Celestia was in shock at what events had just transpired but she quickly geared into action as the guards came to find the room gone and the suspect nowhere to be seen.
“Find the Pony responsible! And bring that vile pony before me!” Celestia had ordered the guards in a way than made the guards fearful.
“Yes your majesty, at once” The guards hurried off in a fright.
There was an emotion that was not felt in such a long time, it wasn’t unfamiliar but now this emotion was burning in Celestia, this was Anger. Anger that would have made a less composed Princess scream out, somepony had dared hit her future husband off and potentially kill him in front of the crowd and out of Celestia’s sight.
The pony who did it in Celestia’s eyes better had hope Jason lives…or Celestia may not have the composure to let that pony live.
No, Anger was not the right emotion to call it, pure fury was more like it, one could swear her magic was taking on a darker shade.
“Twilight Sparkle! Take Jason to the hospital this instant, Luna, you and I are going to find the pony that did this” Celestia orders Twilight and Luna
“You can count on me, Celestia” Twilight says
Luna said nothing but followed immediately, they didn’t failed to notice that Celestia was how Jason would describe it “Super freaking PISSED!”, but they were wise not to bring it up.
(Back to First Person)
‘Jassooooon’
‘Jasooooon…’
‘Oh for the love of god, WAKE UP YOU FAT SLOB!’
AHHHH! Jesus! What just happened? Lots of pain in my head and everywhere…that’s right…I fell…oh no, I’m in some grassy field…is this Equestrian heaven, I’M TOO GOOD LOOKING TO DIE! YOUNG TOO!
Speaking of which, who’s talking?
“Hello? Somebody or somepony around?” I ask around.
“If you turn around mate, you’ll find me” A voice says from behind
I turn around to see a Pony of an orange colour of a Fanta like shade of orange anyway, just an earth pony too and he’s got a pair of wings and a horn for a cutie mark…that’s certainly strange…
“Obvious question to ask, who are you?” I ask the pony.
“Well, I guess you can call me your critical subconscious, the only reason I am here talking to you is because of your injuries and Equestrian magic too, and that magic is why I appear to you as a pony but in every other way I am you” the pony says
“Well that’s interesting, but where are we? Besides the obvious green field with nothing in it” I ask my pony self.
“Well you’re…how do I explain this? Um…in the deepest part of your mind, what you are right now is your primary soul, the fields are meant to represent a calming peace in case of the body about to literally die” the pony explains.
“So, I am not dead but I could be dead?” I ask.
“That’s correct, you hit your head on that roof from quite a height and then you broke your leg as you landed a second time on the roof and I suppose somepony with wings must have saved us because I doubt we’d be as lucky to survive that fall from say, at least 5-10 stories high?” My subconscious reports what happened to us.
“Ouch…I am definitely gonna feel that one when I wake up” I comment.
“You will, but that’s all I know from here, not omnipotent or anything as I am just you as a subconscious” Pony-me says.
“Damn it! I was hoping for helpful pieces of information that would be unrealistically given” I said in a disappointed tone.
“You and me both mate” Pony me was also disappointed.
Yeah, we’re gonna be here a while and no video games, ice cream, cake, nothing over here, this is gonna be a looooooong limbo or whatever we are in right now.
Approximately 1 and half weeks later…
{Back in 3rd person)
“Your Highness, there is still no signs of the suspect at this time and-“ A guard had been forced to give a status update when Celestia came in for an update.
“And what? It’s been a week and a half and not one sign?” Celestia’s temper was rising.
“But it was so sudden and-“ The guard started but it was a wrong move.
“I have had it up to here with excuses! SOMEPONY has dared to attack MY future-husband in front of me! If I were you, I would stop making excuses to your princess and start getting me results before I lose my patience and believe me, my patience needs a microscope to be found, am I getting clear to you?” Celestia had raised her voice at the guard.
The guard was nodding his head off with a bow.
“Yes, your highness” The guard says in a low-voice.
“Tia! Take a trot right now” Luna says from the doorway
Celestia was angry, but not angry enough to take it out on her own sister and instead took her own sister’s advice.
“We art sorry for our sister’s actions, as you know, she is under a lot of stress from what has happened. But it would be advisable to pick up the pace” Luna apologizes for her sister’s outburst.
“It’s alright, your highness, I know friends who have had loved ones almost lost, I should have known better” the guard shakes his head
It is sad to say that this was not the first time Celestia had such an outburst in recent days, but why wouldn’t she? Somepony had dared to push Celestia’s future husband off, almost killed him and now the suspect is nowhere to be found? This angered Celestia to the point at times that her mane and tail were literally burning. Fortunately, Ponies took notice and left her alone.
Twilight, Rainbow Dash and Luna had hoped for Jason’s waking up to have happened by now but it was not the case just yet, but they hoped it was soon. Angry Celestia was starting to scare ponies and she wasn’t herself when she was most angry.
Twilight had been saddened that she had to catch Jason that day, not because nopony else did, it’s that somepony would do such a thing and saying it again, in front of royalty, she kind of realized her actions were rather in the wrong. Dash was at the hospital day and night making sure the would-be-killer doesn’t come to finish Jason off. As for Luna, she was never too happy about the forced marriage deal, but as Luna has been reminded, there are much worse ponies out there, so Jason should be given a shot when he wakes up..
Long story short, the three of them wanted justice be brought down hard to the pony who did this, although Celestia in her anger may have…more extreme ideas.
(Back to First Person)
“Okay seriously, is there any other background than green grass and blue skies? THIS IS DRIVING ME TO INSANITY!” I asked in annoyed expression.
“I’m afraid not, mate. Turns out your brain just can’t download some other backgrounds or something, but if it helps, you should be waking up soon” The pony-me says.
In my mind this place was driving me insane, you’d think this be peaceful, but after what feels like an eternity this place is driving me insane…I have an apology to give to Discord when I wake up.
“So Jason, while we are here, there is one thing I’ve been meaning to ask you and that’s Celestia, you’ve been with her a bit and you still haven’t said you loved her” Pony-me says.
“Eh? I don’t reeeallly love her in that way” I lied.
“Liar, I am you remember? You can’t lie to me and besides, I know your dreams with her in them, even the daydream of you two kissing, I’d say there’s plenty of feelings there” Pony-me says.
“Oh fine, I love her! It started off as some wish for her to have at least a decent emulation of a proper relationship, she deserved that much from me, after that date and that accident kiss I just…imagined myself spending time with her and then all the romance stuff comes afterwards” I reply more honestly.
“See? Was that so hard? Now, confess those feelings to her” Pony-me says.
“What!?” I yell.
“Well if you love her, she should have the right to know and besides I’d say she’d love you too and before you argue, before we were pushed off, she was so happy to see us and she wanted to spend time with you. She definitely loves you pal” Pony-me explains his reasoning.
“Fine…I’ll do it when I wake up." I say to my subconscious
RUUUUMMMMBBLLLEE!
“Oh that’s the waking up sound, well pleasure to meet you Jason and go get her for all our somehow-talking body parts” Pony me says his goodbyes quickly.
“Good-bye me of the critical conscious, it’s a pity I might not meet you again” I say, shaking his hoof before I left.
The place was swirly and sounds were coming in my ears like speech…loud sounds…
2 weeks after the incident…
(Back in Third Person view)
A Cloaked figure had entered the castle and was heading towards the hospital part of the castle, it was a unicorn of dark green colour and he was wearing a batter old cloak to conceal most of his identity for what he was doing in this castle was not something of positive will.
He was finally in front of the door of the target he had meant to finish a fortnight ago, with his target out of the way, his master can move on to his plan to earn Celestia’s favor.
His hoof was on the handle and he prepared to finish his target off, it was time to finish this…
Someone's about to be fried at about 5,500 Degrees Celsius. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
Damn you and your cliffhangers. We don't want cliffhangers, we want to see the 'to-be-epic' smack-down that is to come from sunbutt.
I believe that one should be 'omniscient', not 'omnipotent'.
Also, more cliffhangers, and I'll go beyond grammar-Nazi, I'll go grammar-Gestapo on your arse.
He wajes up becauase he is stabbed on the shoulder. He calls wtf and wobble on the bed in pain then he slaps the attaker and keep screaiming.
Alright then.
Pony magic has healed his leg. The door opens as the assassincorn steps trough the threshold rko out of nowhere. "see Dash its just that easy".
If Celestia finds out who did this, giving them to medic from TF2 would be a merciful thing compared to what she has planed for them most likely.
Fucking cliffhangers another good chapter keep it up
"...batter old cloak"
maybe ya wanted battered
Suspense!
Cliffhanger again!?
Such Evil!
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"To finsh this..."
spolers: I died
6664309 YEEEESSSS! YES! With my master plan, we shall march on the place where fics don't have cliffhangers and SLAUGHTER THEM ALL! ALL OF FIMFICTION WILL BE IN ABSOLUTE CHAOS! MWAHAHAHAHAHA! And then on top of it, I shall be on the throne of fiction like I rightfully should! MUHAHAHAHAHA!
(Sorry, couldn't resist there)
6664654 <_< Staring intensified.
6664664 (Insert the most shit-eating grin ever here) >_o
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It was........................... Blueblood
6661525 why is all the room gone?
Tia is a smidgen OOC...
Damn. was hoping it was twilight. Blueblood is way too obvious to be the villain.
6664309 GASP!!! That's who's under the cloak! Cliffhangers!!!
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It might be Blueblood...
Ugh... Sadly, this happens way too often here. These fics are better than a goddamn F1 car, they go from "might like" to "okay I love" in ten seconds flat. What gives?