• Member Since 27th Apr, 2014
  • offline last seen February 23rd

Crazy-Eyed Sharpshooter

I have a sharp tongue and a steady hand. Best be careful.


Psi Onyx looks like your average earth colt, but he has one thing greater than most young ponies or even ponies at his age: his brain. What he and others see to be a birth defect, Psi lashes out and in turn, leaving many places on fire and ponies in pain. Unable to control it, his family moves away to Ponyville, believing it to be a form of exile. Instead, he is being taught to harness this power in hopes of helping Equestria. Will he succeed in becoming something great, or will the pressure make his mind snap like a twig? Stay tuned...


This is a fic that I'm only partially taking seriously. I came up with the idea 4 years ago and I realized that while the ideas I had are kind of dumb, they could be fun as well, so I'm sticking with it. I hope you enjoy.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 4 )

Dude, this... I would say this concept is very unique! :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

This chapter establishes things well. It alone, however, has not earned my like.

I...need...more! :flutterrage:

Placing on the "To Track" list.

That was kind of weird. Given his literal name, I guess Psi has psionic powers as an Earth pony ala Earthbound or whatever instead of normal unicorn magic?


Well, I can't say too much, as I don't want to spoil anything, so I'll just say this: the story was heavily inspired by one of my favorite sixth generation video games. I took the premise and said, "What if something like this was in Equestria?" and that's what I'm building this on. Yes, it is weird, but I like weird. :heart:w:heart:

The premise in the first chapter is supported nicely in the second. :pinkiesmile: Thus, you have earned the like!

I am looking forward to the next one. :pinkiehappy:

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