Pinkie Pie loves to make people laugh and smile. She works at Sugarcube Corner and makes all sorts of baked goods! From muffins, to cupcakes, to cakes, to brownies, to pancakes, and even milkshakes! So anyone that goes there MUST have a good time and laugh right?... Right?
First fic guys and gals, and it's gonna be short.. Unless you want more of course!
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EDIT: Okay, this was honestly just a test run to see what I do right and wrong, I won't be continuing this because I have a bigger story/fic in mind. Title will be out soon, but it's sorta obvious.
Chapters (2)
This is an interesting idea. I am intrigued and would definitely like to see more
Alright, for your first fic, that wasn't bad. Just a couple of mistakes with things like capitalisation and punctuation. You might benefit from giving this and this a read.
Also, I'd ditch the coloured text if I were you, since it can come across as patronising to your readers.
6491419 Thanks for your input and I'll definitely be looking at those links.
6491397 Thanks!
If a lot more people like it, I'll be doing more than the 3-5 chapters planned.
Leave it to Twilight to make a bullshit detector.
This kinda reminds me of how my vegetarian cousin worked in a meat shop.
Why was this cancelled after only two chapters?
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Was more of a test, might come back eventually but... Had a new idea ya know? Don't wanna get hopes up for a fic I knew I was never going to continue.