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Jay David


Just a guy from Britain who loves MLP.


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It has been a few days since the end of the Friendship Games, and the once-rival groups of Canterlot High and Crystal Prep are now getting along just fine. For Twilight, a former student of the latter, things have been going well. However, during a picnic with the two groups, she soon discovers, to her shock, that her one-time demonic transformation might have earned her a bit more popularity than she would have guessed.

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Well someone had to write about it:pinkiecrazy:

I'm so glad there's room for humor in the aftermath of these things. :pinkiehappy:

Digging into the classic "Evil is Sexy" trope are we? :ajsmug:
Though, to be perfectly honest, I thought Sunset Shimmer looked way more beautiful.:twilightblush:

pure and ethereal doesn't quite get as many heads turning as dark and powerful.

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Props to you, Jay. You've landed a good one here.

6485167 Good or bad, Sunset Shimmer looks always beautiful :yay:

6485199 I couldn't agree more. :raritystarry:

At least she doesn't have a sexy ringtone.

Define 'sexy'...

She was sexy in her evil form :raritywink:

I loved the ending OH COME ON! :rainbowlaugh:

I'd say Vivian is the most beautiful of the three Shadow Beauties... I mean Shadow Sirens. Also, of the Equestrian Sirens, definitely Aria, but Sonata has the funniest perssonality.

Awesome ending.

Plus twilight is a cute nerd that bumbs her from an 8 to a 9 1/2 instantly

Great story you have here and you nailed Twi's personality perfectly. She would be rather embarrassed knowing people found her demon form as sexy.

Really Twilight? You didn't know your evil form oozed sex appeal? Dear heavens you were the sexiest villain I've seen in ages. Personally, my advice, let Rarity design you some dark magi inspired clothing to wear normally. That uniform for Crystal Prep probably won't work at CHS.

Not even reading this, as I'm too busy listening to

#Tetrisalldaymyman

That was definitely something else.

Adding Evil Twilight to Dark Thunder's shipping list...

Sunset smiled, giving Twilight a quick pat on the back, which the latter girl replied to with a smile of her own. As the last few moments sank in for her, she couldn't help but let out a brief chuckle.

"You know, it's kinda silly that I'm worrying about what all those strangers think of me. I mean...it's not as if you girls ever had any weird fantasies about me as a she-demon, right?"

Because of the identity of the two girls having this conversation, it's not totally obvious who asks this question. Both of them, after all, have suffered demonic transformations. I'm guessing that the speaker is Twilight Sparkle -- am I right?

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After a while, a look of realisation crossed Twilight's face, as she slapped her forehead in frustration.
"OH COME ON!!!"

That answers your question methinks.

Congrats on the fav! :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::rainbowkiss:

Dat punchline. :rainbowlaugh:

Ok, I can see where this is coming from. RRRRrrrr... :raritywink:

HAHA! I love it. I could picture them all very vividly. Though Sugarcoat and her 'That was a really bad speech, you should consider not speaking in public' brand bluntness was suspiciously absent, with just one line while everyone else was tiptoeing around saying it. I mean, she was tiptoeing around saying it.

But despite that minor gripe this was great, and that end line!:twilightblush:

"Awww! Our little bookworm is all grown up and coming out of her shell!"

At that, Twilight let out a groan, looking away from her former classmate, instead looking to Sunset.

"DONT ROLL YOUR EYES AT ME!!!" shrieked Sour Sweet, because the Sour/Sweet gimmick was her only distinguishing feature.

I'm sure the guys enjoyed the whole "float into the air wearing a short skirt" aspect of the transformations...

Cute

Best.
Ending.
EVER!!!

6486246 I know I would have if I was there :rainbowlaugh: whycantibethere :raritydespair:

Much keks have been had.

Well... This pretty much summarizes what I thought of Twilight's transformation.

Sunset was beautiful... but Twilight was hot!

...I can't remember the last time a story got a smile out of me. Kudos to you, sir!

Everyone is lesbians for Twilight

Oh, goodie. Everyone's bisexual for twilight. I hate this.

That's a lie this is the best story ever.

Delivers exactly what it promised. My only nitpick was no joke about Sunset having a fanclub after her initial demonic transformation that's died down since she's good now. But pft, it's a nitpick. Great work, have a thumb, a fav, and a follow.

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Gushing sexuality? *shrug* Don't know, didn't see the movie.

I will admit Twilight's demon form was far better looking then Sunset's.

And just like that, top of my Favorite's list.

pure and ethereal doesn't quite get as many heads turning as dark and powerful

Strange Phantasm counters with BELLDANDY!
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Okay, that was funny.

And then Rarity makes her that outfit for Halloween.

One of the best short stories I've read. I did found Twilight's form attractive. Sunset's alicorn form is beautiful but not that sexy.

Hope to see more stories like this!

6486185 she definitely doesn't sugar coat anything

... oh, I get it!

What, nothing for Sunset Satan? :trixieshiftright:

Didn't MythrilMoth already write this? There was a chapter in Just Girls Talking about guys finding Twilight sexy uploaded on September 30, and this was published yesterday...

:rainbowlaugh:
That ending!

6486796 I was going to bring this point up, but you beat me to it.


6485167 Definetley agree.

6487062 I will always wonder how Kid Icarus fics are never made. And even if they are made, they are postponed/cancelled since atleast 1 year ago

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