• Member Since 16th Mar, 2015
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Miralusa


Just a simple girl who wants to write great romance stories involving two special someponies.

Comments ( 15 )

Nice, though I thought you didn't do clopfics.

The sex was nice though I would have preferred if they tribbed rather than used a random strap-on. I dunno, I find it more intimate.

6486863 first, I basically started thinking what's the worst that could happen and second
the strap on was more of a trust thing between them to me, which to me was much more intimate. The fact that twilight was willing to let sunset do that.

So Awesome!!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

That was a great story. I was wondering if you were going to do something along the lines of Friendship Games or is that pretty much out of the question?

6489118 it's in the works after I watched it, nothing concrete right now, but it might happen. :twilightsmile:

6489400 Ah okay. I didn't really know since Pony Twilight doesn't appear till the very end and I didn't really know how she was going to fit as well as Twilight and Sunset's relationship. I can't wait to read it none the less.

I found the rapid pace and repetitive sentence structure a bit off-putting.

Very nice!
Hope you do more like these

So hi, my name is Alicia and I’ll be your server for today, can I start you two off with some drinks?” Alicia asked placing menus in front of Twilight and Sunset.

Omg:pinkiegasp:
First time I've even seen my name in a Fimfiction!
Awesome story:raritystarry: Sunlight for life!

Maybe have a prequel focussing on Twilight and Sunset's time.

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Wait so your name is Alicia? That's a pretty name!:twilightsmile:

One phrase to describe: 20% cooler than the stories I read on Wattpad! :heart: I love it and SUNLIGHT FOREVER!

“Twilight smelt like…” Fluttershy started.

“Yep,” Applejack said stifling a laugh.

“That means…” Fluttershy tried again.

“Yup,” Applejack cutting Fluttershy off again.

After a moment of silence Pinkie interjected. “I don’t get it,”

c'mon pinkie u can break the 4th wall u were probably there to see it

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