It's been a long time since Princess Luna did any big stunts with the night sky. Since her return, she's scarcely dared to change the position of a single star, for fear of earning every astronomer's ire. So when somepony brings up lunar eclipses, Luna is eager to make a spectacle out of it.
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Not much to say on this one--it's a short, sharp little piece that does (I think) exactly what you intended it to do. It's nice to see Luna so happy!
6496061 Thank you!
This was beautiful. And that is all that I can say about it, for I am rendered speechless.
Oh yes. Yes yes yes yes. I loved this story. To see Luna come into her own and even return to the place of her imprisonment, but on much better terms was quite uplifting. A part of me even wishes we could see the entire night of revelry. Overall, this was a nice piece that I really really enjoyed as well as went back and read again. I have no complaints other than it needs more views and likes.
Pretty cool. I could see Luna being a little bummed out that she has to submit to all this bureaucracy to do something like a Lunar eclipse, but I suppose it could be a side effect of her and Celestia taking control of the celestial bodies, like needing to conform to strict standards. In the process of bureaucracy though, it seems basically everypony is aware of her Lunar eclipse and is staying up to watch it.
It's also a good thing for Luna to have a bit of closure in the process by returning to the moon on her own terms and doing something good and productive while she's there, instead of wallowing in her thoughts for a thousand years with no possible outlet.
7745007 You're very good at long-form feedback.