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When Midnight Sparkle opens rifts in the world around her, Sugarcoat falls through one of them. She lands in a strange new world, finding herself in a new, equine body, having also managed to fall back through time. How will she get back to her own time and place?

That doesn't matter right now. Right now, it's funnier if she ends up getting caught up in major events in the lives of the ponies around her. So come and read as Sugarcoat leaves her own mark on pony history in the most blunt way possible.

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"You'd take 22 minutes to solve a problem that could be solved in two,"

Sugarcoat broke the fourth wall, and she's not even Pinkie's Shadowbolt "version".

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

...goddammit, Twink.

Haven't even read, know this is gonna be good. Loved Sugarcoat, would have killed Soursweet and clones Sugarcoat.

6468049 Yeah, that's Lemon Zest's title.

This is pure genius. :rainbowlaugh: Although I hope Sugarcoat doesn't give them the answer to every problem. :derpytongue2:

"You'd take 22 minutes to solve a problem that could be solved in two,"

Pfft, you made me spit all over my kindle screen! :rainbowlaugh:

This is a good story, but the chapters are a little short, though that's to be expected given Sugarcoat's blunt nature.

this is glorious :pinkiecrazy:

For some reason, this exact story shows up at the top of the Similar tab.

The same one.

This story.

Is similar to this story.

What.

YOU JUST MADE ME LAUGH OH MY GOD. Sugarcoat is my favorite Shadowbolt.

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What can I say? It's very similar to itself!

This....this is what I need in my life.

Man, these are going to be short.

Common sense for the win.

Definitely tracking this. Sugarcoat is awesome.

Now would be a good time to warn Twilight's friends that the Gala is going to suck, but I guess you can only interfere so much.

Stop it. Stop the madness.

As amazing as this story is, I feel like we're missing how Sugarcoat even got to Equestria in the first place.

Despite the fact that you say it out in the description, I think it could be proved invalid if a chapter isn't made, showing her how she arrived...

But still, this is a funny fanfic...

This story is gold, pure gold. I love it and I need more.

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

YES WE NEED MORE SUGARMAC POSTHASTE

You are doing the lord's work with this story.

GIVE HIM ALL OUR MONEY, CLEARLY WE ARE DEALING WITH ARTISTIC GENIUS HERE!

Oh, NO...there's a disturbance in the Force.

SugarMac shipping has been BORN.

I can't wait to see what you come up with for Dragonshy. Though for maximum effectiveness, Sugarcoat's bluntness should be aimed at Celestia for THAT one.

What have you unleashed?!

Please tell me Sugarcoat will pop out of Twilight's bathwater in Feeling Pinkie Keen.

...where is she staying? I feel this must be asked.

"Stop rhyming so much," Sugarcoat said. "It's irritating."
"Okie dokie lokie!"

XD

Another fun installment.

I think we know who'll be on the receiving end of Sugarcoat's bluntness cannon for the NEXT one.

The one I'm really looking forward to is still two chapters away...

Brutus. Benedict Arnold. Tokyo Rose. All names that meant absolutely nothing to Pinkie Pie.

This is great. :rainbowlaugh:

Sugaercoat is love, Sugarcoat is life.

Personally, I want to see some more Sugarixie in the future.

Maybe in the Magic Duel chapter?

This one exceeded my expectations by pointing out the bloody obvious AND addressing the episode's moral with blunt force.

Now, what you do with the NEXT chapter will be the deciding factor on whether or not this goes into my Favorites instead of staying in Tracking.

I have high expectations for the Dragonshy chapter. Don't blow it. :raritywink:

And everyone stood and watched Trixie's act of tricks and enjoyed it and she left afterwards and then everyone sat and ate some donuts.

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

...is that a Kingdom Come reference I spot?

Majin Syeekoh
Story Approver

...that was awesome.

Sugarcoat is right. Twilight sucks at this.

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Considering this just severely undermined the whole reason for Magic Duel, I look forward to seeing how that's addressed assuming the story gets that far

Sugarcoat is basically the sane and sensible - if very, very blunt - voice of the audience.

Hat's off to you for managing to address the important points without taking a moral stand for either side. You really don't see that very often.

Yeah, she's going to be prevalent in season 1 a lot. A lot of people forget, especially those who think the show's gotten 'worse', is how childish season 1 was. Don't get me wrong, it's still good. I still enjoy most of these episodes, but a lot of them could have been resolved quicker with more mature characters, such as they are now.

So far, this story is really interesting, but it's a bit too short. That's of course nothing against this fic as it's main point is Sugarcoat to speak up her mind. Though...

Friendship is Magic: Them knowing beforehand about it wouldn't change much and Twilight was kind of anti-friends at the start.
Applebuck Season: While I did like that chapter {seriously, someone write a Sugarmac fic} I don't think Applejack would listen. She already ignored her own brother. A stranger wouldn't do much to sway her.

I'm interested in how you're going to go about Dragonshy... Keep writing this. Sugarcoat is my favorite Shadowbolt and I should really get onto writing a story about her.

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Well, it looks like the pressure is on for today, isn't it? :twilightsmile:

i liked this, the fact that they wont allways listen to Sugercoat will make future chapters interesting

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futer

Fuhrer? Nah I'm kidding

6481399 GIMME YOUR OREOS!

Celestia's so lazy.

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Yeah.

Sugarcoat is smarter than Twilight. I like it.

Hrm.

Eh.

I'll give this one a B.

For reference, what you should have done with this one is have Sugarcoat point out to Celestia that perhaps the immortal sun goddess and her rather sizeable, armed and trained Royal Guard were better-suited to deal with a dragon than a librarian, a tailor, a weatherpony, a farmer, a baker, and a pony who runs an animal shelter in her own home.

Didn't earn the instant fave with this one, but I'm sure you'll get there eventually!

Sugarcoat is best Shadowbolt, hands down. I love her so much.
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She's a little turd and I LOVE HER FOR IT.

Wow, this is amazing, i was just expecting another funny anti-climating resolution like the other chapters, but instead, you did the most unexpected thing, (well at least for me), Twilight went and did her errand anyway, amazing.

10/10 - its OK

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