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overlord-flinx


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Hate; Verb: a feeling of intense or passionate dislike for something or someone.

Hate is seen as a strong word. A word that rarely ever meets how much someone doesn't like something else or someone else. Usually people just exaggerate it but never truly hate anything or anyone. To hate hardly ever truly happens when you're just a child; you just don't know better.

Now, psychologists have been trying to explain that to Fleur for years. She couldn't possibly hate Twilight Sparkle. She hardly even knows her. But she hates... And her hate is deep rooted and it builds every single day.

Sure, no one likes Twilight at Crystal Prep. Really, who would? But Fleur hates. And her hate goes deep.


Based on Fleur's clear hate for Twilight in "Friendship Games".


Now has a sequel! ā€œI Idolize You, Fleur de Lisā€.

Reading by TheCaptainSand/CaptainBron3y HERE.

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What did I just READ?! Woah! Brilliant!!!!

I'm... not sure what I just read. ... it was well written save for some instances of misspelling of Fluer Fleur's name.

This story is about Fleur's insane, all-consuming hatred for Twilight Sparkle, and the sheer spite oozing out of the narration makes it great. But what makes this story truly amazing is that for all of her obsession and loathing, Fleur doesn't realize that Twilight was just following her suggestion, making her the architect of her own humiliation. The irony you weaved into this tale is beautiful, Overlord-Flinx.

BenRG #4 · Sep 27th, 2015 · · · Hate ·

For some reason, I can hear Sugarcoat saying to Fleur: "You're incredibly shallow; you know that, don't you?"

:rainbowlaugh: One day Fleur shall get her revenge. :pinkiecrazy:

Twilight Sparkle, squarely little nerd that she was, had been walking through the halls.

Is squarely really the word you want here or do you mean squirrelly?

6467558 The second. Thank you.

6467414

Fleur :"STUPID SEXY TWILIGHT! WHY DONĀ“T YOU LOOK AT ME? TELL ME IĀ“M PRETTY! "

H'um...

You misspelled Fleur's name... Its Fleur not Fluer...

Anyways! I look forward to reading this!

6467593 I'm sure I fixed all of them at this point. But thank you.

I will drum on the thumbs up icon for the next ten minuets in vain!

:rainbowlaugh: So, Fleur hates Twilight because they both came to school wearing the same hairstyle? XD

Good story!

Fleur's got some MAJOR issues...

I'm on her 'list', now, aren't I? (under Twilight)

you know, hate is a strong word, but this girl, she hopes for the Demise Of twily every day, and plans on recording, I think she exceeds hate just a bit

6467943 I so regret peeking at the comments before reading the story. :facehoof:

that time she took a croquet to Twilight's kneecap.

Perfectly rational...

She never even said sorry for that mallet she broke on her knee...

PERFECTLY RATIONAL...

Even if Fleur needs to break her other kneecap with another mallet.

perfectly rational.

6469174 I'm glad someone's seeing it Fleur's way.

Pfft, I lol'd, :rainbowlaugh:

Sounds like a perfectly reasonable TEENAGE reason to hate someone

:rainbowlaugh: 10/10 fantastically done.

Just one mistake:

The little nerd's face contorted into some disgusting display

--Sollace

"So I've been thinking of wearing my hair in a sort of top bun. What do you think, Sugarcoat?"

"I think you talk to me because you have no other people to talk to."

:rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:

6467414

For some reason, I can hear Sugarcoat saying to Fleur: "You're incredibly shallow; you know that, don't you?"

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Overrated.

Dang that's petty.

6467568 *screams at Twilight* WITNESS ME!

Some proofreading issues with tense and homophones, but aside from those, a great explanation for human Fleur's notably higher loathing of Twilight. Headcanon accepted.

6469849 Overrated? It's not even rated. Heh.

6470595 Eeer you might be taking it as a joke but I think you know what I mean so there's no need for me to be rude while stating my opinion is there?

6470680 I do know what you mean. I'm just saying it's not exactly right since there are dozens of stories that came out around the same time that beat this one. This is just another stone in the water. Heh.

6470686 We can all just admit that this as well as every story that came about the subject of the movie is taking advantage of short term popularity.

6470702 Well, yes. That's not a bad thing considering the reading pool has been dry lately.

6470792 Seems so to me. Could be just me.

6470798 I dunno I don't pay attention. But quite honestly some fics aren't really worth a feature just because of fleeting popularity. That's just me tho. Some of them aren't even that good.

6470860 Either way, this conversation has maxed out my rule on length. Thank you for the comment either way.

6470866 Anytime. We can move this to a pm if you so wish.

That's dark. Hopefully she'll just scare Twilight with a quesadilla instead of breaking her kneecaps.

Whoa whoa whoa, what the hell do you mean Fleur's 'clear hate for Twilight in the Friendship Games'? What the f? Not exactly 'friendship' games if there's hatred now, is there? Did you just make up that hatred part?

6471858 In the hall she clearly ribbed her. And while she was singing her song, while everyone else was watching the teacher and not being aware of Twilight, Fleur went and shut the blinds to shut her out.

6471877 That's...not really hatred. That's just Fleur on her period. Alternatively she's just being a bitch, but hatred? I would think hatred would be a bit more than just pulling dick moves on Twilight.

6471890 Semantics and different reasoning.

Well... That's just as petty as all get out. Sounds like Fleur really does need to get out more. Perhaps with a certain mustachioed socialite wearing a fancy pair of pants?:raritywink:

6472514 My universe they're brother and sister. Heh.

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Well they do seem very close... Yes, very close indeed.

6472540 A brother that's done all the work and a sister that has no problems leeching off her brother's success and use his excess money. Heh.

I would say that Fleur's attitude is unbelievably stupid, save for the fact that there are people who contract such hatreds for equally-stupid causes in reality.

I wonder what she thought after seeing Midnight Twilight.

Also, to those mentioning that Fleur has a crush and wants Twilight to pay attention to her, the meme your're looking for is "Notice me, Senpai..."
That sh*t is Kawaii.

6472027 Okay then. I wouldn't call it hatred myself, but then again different perspectives, right?

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