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Super Trampoline


"Of all the terrible batponies in the world, you're the least terrible."~PresentPerfect🐴Ponk & GlimGlam are best ponies🐴Text 714-496-3119 with the name of an MLP character to get a cute picture!

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This story is a sequel to Twilight Sparkle Drinks Tea


Rainbow Dash is in cloud jail for blowing up the weather factory. That doesn't mean she can't run a bustling drug empire though. Except it does. Expect mangoes, crawdads, coat hangers, paper towel rolls, and retcons. And office furniture rentals.

PRAISE FOR THE STORY:
"This is a great example of 'Just because you can, doesn't mean you should.' Super has mentioned his lack of focus in recent blog posts; if this is all he is capable of writing right now, maybe he shouldn't be writing." ~Super Trampoline


A hearty thank you to my Patreon patrons Singularity Dream, ocalhoun, and Littlecolt! This story, being not very good, is not a Patreon story.

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This is why it's important to do a test run of your story first. Just because the code parser can't find any syntax errors doesn't mean you haven't written the story you meant to. Infinite loops, impossible conditions, and character drift all need to be caught in the debugging process.

In other words, nice open beta.

6450417 Thg ,y compmuter is being weird and treating the backspace key as an infivitation to go back to the last page i was on even though i'm clearly typing something out right now. anyway yeah re reading this the transition wasn't as awkward as I remembered it being., aslo this line made me laugh:

It will be like all those changeling romance stories, but stupider."

And the moral of the story is that, if you ever despair, if you ever want to end it all, just remember... there's still ants, and they're everywhere. Even within you.:rainbowderp:

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