When I walk something interesting happens. I find twenty dollars. I see a deer. I see a run away dog. I found a filly Pinkie Pie. And-oops. Uhhhhhh see you later!
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It's a My Little Dashie clone.
You immediately lose 840 points.
6452050 not clone
parody
Just read it.
First of all, Dash? I don't care if your actual girlfriend's name is Dashery; there's no excuse for having a name so similar to an already existing character in a fic.
You're grammar is pretty good. I noticed a few errors, but very minor.
The dialogue is pretty forced, as well. I understand you need to get some exposition out of the way, but a lot of these facts don't matter in the very beginning. (How they met, the beanie babies, etc.) Use the first couple chapters to build up your basic characters, and add details to them later.
As mentioned earlier, it's a My Little Dashie clone, but I'll let that slide if the fic improves.
Here. Have an upvote and a follow.
6452104 'Sigh' in my mind I try to make it as detailed as possible, but I guess I still mess up.
Also PINKIE PIE IS BEST PONY!!!!! In my opinion.
Oh also about the Dash thing it's actually true.
Is Dashery a clone of Rainbow Dash?
(The names are so familiar. Dash? Dashery?) 
Give me a break.
Lol funny .
ok next chapter please.
6452415 My girlfriends a flippin blonde.
Please give us another chapter!
Aaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww
and aahhhhhh lol
"Yes! Pinkie Pie I am you father!" I can hear James Earl Jones saying that in my head!!!!!!